Gravitational Pull

When I sit atop enchanted hills 
draped in green silk,
I feel your presence so fiercely; 
our distance waning,
feeling it's gravitational pull, as 
our souls are entwined in 
iridescent bliss, amidst this 
phantasmagoric love story.
Swirling amidst the clouds, that 
blanket our hearts, with 
everlasting emotions—
I cover myself in your
honey-glazed scent,
pirouetting beneath 
glimmering astral showers, 
drizzled throughout our 
cosmic haven of resplendency. 
Cradled in the ballad of 
your sempiternal devotion and love, 
I’m addicted to your alchemy, as 
I feel wisps of our intimacy, 
sparkling in alabaster beams of 
a virescent destiny,
layered across aureate tales 
of our chasmic ever after.
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Lane Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 8:45 AM
Windswept thoughts of love and devotion. Congratulations on your winning poem.
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May 14, 2026 at 4:55 AM
Fave it is
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May 14, 2026 at 4:55 AM
Ah my beautiful soul sis! You are a gem for supporting my contest with this profound entry flowing with such exquisite diction! I absolutely love the way youve romaticized every line here especially loved "I’m addicted to your alchemy, as I feel wisps of our intimacy, sparkling in alabaster beams of a virescent destiny," wow! You know, I always admire how you use words often not used by others! Pleasure reading this take! Congratulations! Sending you light always
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