Gravitational Pull

Today I feel the pull
of gravity
on the depth of my depravity
There within that cavity 
resides my anxiety
It seeps out of my porosity 
feeding the insanity

I fear the shadowy part
that craves my heart
In the darkness my eyes dart
convinced I’ll be ultimately 
ripped apart

The thoughts and images
That reside in me
are the splintered bits
of my history 
I can feel my mouth covered
held down in my misery
It’s not the place I wish to be
I’m drowning there unable to see
praying a hand will reach out for me
I don’t want to be lost to eternity 
or this tick tock, tick talk insanity 

Out of body
Out of mind
Separated from me
what will I find
Can I escape 
the bonds and chains that bind
Even when I look ahead
I’m pulled back behind
On my spirit
the demons have dined
My tick talk clock
has begun to unwind
Can there be light
for one who is blind

“Amazing grace how sweet the sound.
That saved a wretch like me.
I once was lost, but now am found.
was blind but now I see.”

A voice in the dark 
Summons me 
Offering me protection 
from my inner enemy
Experiencing true love
cleanses me instantly 
I’m not meant to be bound 
by mere gravity 
As I’m filled with a higher Love 
God teaches me
I was born for more
and meant to be free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 5:33 PM
Hello Richard Lamoureux,I have enjoyed this poem about God. Have a nice evening my friend. Hugs Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 5:33 PM
Hello Richard, hugs nack to you. Darlene.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 7:33 AM
You as well, hugs Rick.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 10:34 PM
Beautiful as always. Amazing Grace. "Grace "....is God's "undeserved kindness." We do nothing to deserve this precious gift. Acknowledging its value helps us to put off every sin that easily entangles. Congrats, congrats, congrats!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 7:34 AM
Thanks Barbara. ;0)
Capitano Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:32 AM
Great write, Richard, an introspection full of wisdom, inspiration, good advice and right posture. Well done.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:48 AM
Thanks Phil. ;0)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:05 AM
"The thoughts and images That reside in me are the splintered bits of my history " - this is so true!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:48 AM
Thanks Caren.
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 11:02 AM
A 'Houdini' write, 'The Great Escape!' Another profound, sensitive write. Enjoyed the ruminations, contemplations,...the implications. Best of everything, Gershon
Lamoureux Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 10:47 AM
What a great comment Gershon.
Duet Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 6:52 PM
Great poem, Richard. The battle between the good angel and the bad angel continues to plague all of mankind. It's just good to know we can always say, "Get thee behind me, Satan" and with God's help we can return to normalcy and grace and never give up fighting "the good fight". Congrats on getting a well-deserved POTW. :D
Lamoureux Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 8:24 AM
Yes that is wise. Satan is powerless when God offer’s his protection. Thanks for your Visit Carole.
La France Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 10:19 AM
Richard, congratulations on POTW , a very deserving honor, fantastic poem, loved it !
Lamoureux Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 8:29 AM
Thanks Constance. Hugs Rick.
Hamilton Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 9:31 AM
Wow Rick, how did I miss this beauty? Late to the party but congrats on POTW. This should be poem of the year, so stunning really, I love your free verse, it's a nice surprise when it's mixed with rhyme, free verse and mono rhyme and rhyme, this is a classic write, gotta fave this one!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 8:34 AM
Thanks John, much appreciated.
Cunningham Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 10:54 PM
A well written verse Richard, congratulations on POTW honours. Tom.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 8:45 AM
Thanks Tom. ;0)
Daniel Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 9:45 PM
So very true, Rick, nice and deep poem:) congratulations on your POTW:)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 8:45 AM
Thanks Jo.
Nicole Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 8:22 PM
We are free from the bondage of sin, when we follow God. Keep His Commandments. His blood continually covers us. Such a blessing indeed. Your thoughts lift my heart to the sky. Congratulations Richard, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy
Lamoureux Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 8:54 AM
Thanks Brandy, I’m glad my thoughts lifted you. Blessings Rick.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 7:11 PM
"As I’m filled with a higher Love God teaches me I was born for more and meant to be free" I so agree with this philosophy Richard. This is a splendid choice for POTW. Congratulations on your well deserved honor Richard! I love this! xxoo
Lamoureux Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 8:55 AM
Thanks Connie, we are on the same wave length.
Chiri Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 2:04 PM
Congrats on potw Rick!;)
Chiri Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 12:22 AM
My pleasure Rick! Always!;)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Thanks Brenda. Hugs Rick.
One Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 1:52 PM
Great choice for potw..
Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Thanks my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 11:24 AM
Was this for a contest? I read it before, and now I see you got POTW, so BIG congrats for that. Well deserved, Richard.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 2:31 PM
No, not for a contest. You did visit me on the 22nd.
Pandit Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 10:08 AM
A gem of a poem--congrats Richard on POTW.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 10:11 AM
Thanks Vijay. ;0)
Kitchin Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 9:08 AM
Rick, another poetry gem from you, excellently penned, congratulations on POTW!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 10:11 AM
What a pleasant surprise. Thanks for your visit.
Adams Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 8:26 AM
back with a big congratulations hug to you with your POTW honors Rick...i enjoyed reading this one again... hugsssss :)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 10:12 AM
Thanks for dropping back, hugs Rick.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 7:04 AM
Very deep poem, Richard! It is soul-stirring. Your depth of thought/simplicity of expression shines w/cosmic brilliance. A fave of the first order. GrEaT poem!! Love and more love always.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 7:29 AM
Thanks Freddie, it’s always nice having a visit from you.
There Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 9:46 PM
Really enjoyed this thought-provoking and relatable piece... "Amazing Grace" has helped me through a dark time or two. Congats on POTD, Richard...
Lamoureux Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Thanks HT, hugs Rick.
Godwin Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 9:02 PM
You did what to me is the coolest thing a poet can do: you wrote a poem that gave me to me and I will absolutely FAV it. I love the rhyme scheme, the style, the imagery that delivered the devil's carousel and the imagery of truth with which you ended. This is IT, the feel, the high, the stirrings and soulful twinges that hooked me on poetry many years ago. Love it.(side note: I regret I missed your contest) Again - love this poem and believe it was divinely inspired. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Lamoureux Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Your comment makes my day Cay Cay. This is a gift. Hugs Rick.
Milgate Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 10:49 AM
Wonderful thoughts. written in such poetry and rhyme ones a thinking person wonders about and then a moment of love and sanity. Thank you.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 8:03 AM
Thanks Linda. Hugs Rick.
Papyrus Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 9:45 PM
The balance of life, and unsure how to balance it. I believe prayer is the calm in any storm. This poem is relatable to many....even an atheist. The struggle is real! Nice work
Lamoureux Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 8:23 AM
Thanks my brother.
Y. Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 3:17 PM
WoW! Richard, It's like you peeped inside the human mind. I can most definitely relate to this well written write. The last portion of this poem was likened to a ray of sunshine that just soothed the soul. Excellent write. Have a fantastic day:-) Alexis
Lamoureux Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 8:23 AM
You as well Alexis.
One Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 3:00 PM
Damn because of the subject.. sounded like a real battle of the mind .
Lamoureux Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 8:26 AM
Thanks SO.
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