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Graveyard

I've attempted to dissect “graveyard” as a compound, Not in the back, nor in the front, nowhere to be found. I delved into deep and hard, Without doubt it’s not a yard! For nomenclature I'd rename it as a “graveground”. Given yet another thorough thought to this remark, “Graveground” as parallel to joyful “playground” sounds dark, My deep delving disregard, Reattach “grave” back to “yard” - For nomenclature we rename “playground” to “playpark”. February 20, 2023 Sponsor: Constance La France Contest: Graveyard

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Date: 3/2/2023 12:20:00 AM
Margarita, I like your limerick poem and congratulations on your Honorable Mention in my Writing Challenge - G Words, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/25/2023 11:46:00 AM
- Congratulations... enjoy reading, Margarita :) - hugs
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Date: 2/24/2023 7:50:00 PM
"“Graveground” as parallel to joyful “playground” sounds dark" - interesting, indeed. beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/24/2023 8:11:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/24/2023 4:07:00 PM
So cute and clever, Margarita! I smiled at every line. Congratulations!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/24/2023 5:11:00 PM
Thank you! Me too:)
Date: 2/24/2023 2:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A fun Limerick write. Have a great/blessed day writing away............................
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/24/2023 5:10:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/22/2023 7:01:00 PM
I imagine that you had yourself a bit of fun writing this one, Margarita! Touche, Gershon
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/23/2023 7:42:00 AM
I did indeed:)
Date: 2/21/2023 7:01:00 AM
Much more light hearted than mine of the same name! Excellent poem, tackling a tricky one from an interesting angle :)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/23/2023 5:46:00 AM
I’m on a lighter side on this:)
Date: 2/20/2023 11:53:00 PM
Brought me a smile!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/21/2023 12:46:00 AM
That was the intention:)
Date: 2/20/2023 8:44:00 PM
That's cute. Margarita.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/21/2023 12:45:00 AM
Hope it’s gravely cute:)

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