Nette Onclaud Poet Couplet

Gratitude's Flow

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when moments are lid covered, like  mourning shawl
my senses stoop ever weary as they begin to fall,
then I hear a  chuckling of street kids spilling the day
as if hours are given by a Maker to strum and gaily play,
by  then; I hold His LIGHT, a sliver of it begins to bloom
erasing crumbs of doubt in shades of twisted gloom.




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Robert Ball's Honoring the Father Contest
by: nette onclaud

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Elaine George July 29, 2011 at 9:35 AM Lovely! nette. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. lainie

Kash Poet July 28, 2011 at 4:04 PM Congrats Nette on your win...excellent write as usual.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair July 28, 2011 at 10:43 AM Congrats on the win. awesome..hugs, SJ

Wilma Neels July 28, 2011 at 8:01 AM awesome write Nette :) congratulations on your win in the contest *hugs*

Joseph Osita July 28, 2011 at 3:59 AM An amazing write!.Congratulations on your big win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 27, 2011 at 6:44 PM Congrats Nette luv on another wonderful winning poem in this contest with these lovely poetic lines so amazing ..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 27, 2011 at 2:31 PM Congratulations on your win in Moses's "Best Shot" contest Nette. Love, Carol

David Williams July 27, 2011 at 12:48 PM hey Nette, congrats on your win. David

John Freeman July 27, 2011 at 12:11 PM Nette, Your sponsor receives your poem's grace. Congratulations on your poem's honor. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta July 27, 2011 at 12:06 PM My congratulations on the third place win in the contest of John,nette

Joe Maverick May 16, 2011 at 3:19 PM Interesting emotions colourful and discriptive write Nette! well enjoyed the reading !

Gautami Phookan May 16, 2011 at 12:21 PM nette, outstanding write and loved the images you sketched here of a nice, friendly neighborhood.Congratulations on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown May 16, 2011 at 10:52 AM Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Nette. Love,Carol

Matt Hunt May 15, 2011 at 10:46 PM Congrats on the win Nette!:) R.M.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 15, 2011 at 2:09 PM Happy Sunday Nette dear and u have seen the unkindness strike again on PS ..so sad to see this too but seems the enemy does not take a vacation luv... my searing write is going to go blog shortly and am content in my own self confidence that this too shall pass..my sweet friend..luv..

Carrie Richards May 15, 2011 at 8:33 AM Another stunning write, for you Nette!!! I always expect something amazing...and you never fail ! Congratulations!

Jack Horne May 15, 2011 at 8:14 AM Many congrats on your win, Nette : )

Kash Poet May 15, 2011 at 7:54 AM Amazing write Nette.Congrats on your win...

Wilma Neels May 15, 2011 at 7:30 AM A stunning piece Nette and I see congratulations are in order as well ;) hope your weekend is a good one *hugs*

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 15, 2011 at 7:20 AM Congrats Nette dear friend on your HM in Paula's contest with this magnficent write luv.. enjoy your special honor for excellence and originality in creativity .. as always .. amazed...

Michael J. Falotico May 15, 2011 at 5:52 AM Congrats Nette on your HM in te contest... Very nice write my dear riend...Michael

Cory Long May 15, 2011 at 5:11 AM congrats on your HM.. cory

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2011 at 1:37 AM Nette, this is wonderful Wow, you must have posted it right before she closed the contest out. Congrats on your HM, a spot which I am happy to share with you because your poem,lady, is AWESOME. Luv, Andrea

Emma Buckeridge May 14, 2011 at 11:57 PM A fine write Nette. Congratulations x

Samual Ronthorpe May 14, 2011 at 9:34 PM Very good Nette. Congrats

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