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Gratitude's Flow

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when moments are lid covered, like  mourning shawl
my senses stoop ever weary as they begin to fall,
then I hear a  chuckling of street kids spilling the day
as if hours are given by a Maker to strum and gaily play,
by  then; I hold His LIGHT, a sliver of it begins to bloom
erasing crumbs of doubt in shades of twisted gloom.




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Robert Ball's Honoring the Father Contest
by: nette onclaud

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Elaine George

Date: 7/29/2011 9:35:00 AM

Lovely! nette. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. lainie

Kash Poet

Date: 7/28/2011 4:04:00 PM

Congrats Nette on your win...excellent write as usual.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 7/28/2011 10:43:00 AM

Congrats on the win. awesome..hugs, SJ

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/28/2011 8:01:00 AM

awesome write Nette :) congratulations on your win in the contest *hugs*

Joseph Osita

Date: 7/28/2011 3:59:00 AM

An amazing write!.Congratulations on your big win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/27/2011 6:44:00 PM

Congrats Nette luv on another wonderful winning poem in this contest with these lovely poetic lines so amazing ..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2011 2:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Moses's "Best Shot" contest Nette. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 7/27/2011 12:48:00 PM

hey Nette, congrats on your win. David

John Freeman

Date: 7/27/2011 12:11:00 PM

Nette, Your sponsor receives your poem's grace. Congratulations on your poem's honor. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/27/2011 12:06:00 PM

My congratulations on the third place win in the contest of John,nette

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/16/2011 3:19:00 PM

Interesting emotions colourful and discriptive write Nette! well enjoyed the reading !

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/16/2011 12:21:00 PM

nette, outstanding write and loved the images you sketched here of a nice, friendly neighborhood.Congratulations on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/16/2011 10:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Nette. Love,Carol

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/15/2011 10:46:00 PM

Congrats on the win Nette!:) R.M.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/15/2011 2:09:00 PM

Happy Sunday Nette dear and u have seen the unkindness strike again on PS ..so sad to see this too but seems the enemy does not take a vacation luv... my searing write is going to go blog shortly and am content in my own self confidence that this too shall pass..my sweet friend..luv..

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/15/2011 8:33:00 AM

Another stunning write, for you Nette!!! I always expect something amazing...and you never fail ! Congratulations!

Jack Horne

Date: 5/15/2011 8:14:00 AM

Many congrats on your win, Nette : )

Kash Poet

Date: 5/15/2011 7:54:00 AM

Amazing write Nette.Congrats on your win...

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/15/2011 7:30:00 AM

A stunning piece Nette and I see congratulations are in order as well ;) hope your weekend is a good one *hugs*

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/15/2011 7:20:00 AM

Congrats Nette dear friend on your HM in Paula's contest with this magnficent write luv.. enjoy your special honor for excellence and originality in creativity .. as always .. amazed...

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/15/2011 5:52:00 AM

Congrats Nette on your HM in te contest... Very nice write my dear riend...Michael

Cory Long

Date: 5/15/2011 5:11:00 AM

congrats on your HM.. cory

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2011 1:37:00 AM

Nette, this is wonderful Wow, you must have posted it right before she closed the contest out. Congrats on your HM, a spot which I am happy to share with you because your poem,lady, is AWESOME. Luv, Andrea

Emma Buckeridge

Date: 5/14/2011 11:57:00 PM

A fine write Nette. Congratulations x