grapes

with mouths smudged purple we plunk grapes into our pails . . . sangria sunrise

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Howard Kerr

Date: 5/26/2025 5:37:00 PM

Andrea, So good of you to praise L Letter Link. I appreciate that so much As for your Grapes Haiku all I can say is it is peerless in its picture perfect presentation. Amazing image rich piece Howard

Rick Parise

Date: 5/26/2025 5:31:00 PM

You brought back a great memory......The one row of grapes in the back yard, leading out to the sunrise. I was 13yrs old. Keizer, Oregon /// Love it !!! ///// I'm honored to take the top spot in your contest...so cool ??? ///// God Bless you and yours, Rick

Rick Parise
Date: 5/26/2025 5:32:00 PM

??? I didn't type thoughs question marks

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/26/2025 3:02:00 PM

So visual and auditory, Andrea! Love it! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/26/2025 4:11:00 PM

well, thanks for making it look like I got some extra comments here. hahaha. Your comment showed up three times, but I am not going to complain!! Thanks for seeing my haiku.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/26/2025 2:55:00 PM

So visual and auditory, Andrea! Love it! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/26/2025 2:47:00 PM

So visual and auditory, Andrea! Love it! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!