grapes

with mouths smudged purple
we plunk grapes into our pails . . . 
sangria sunrise

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Jim Healey

June 15, 2025 at 3:07 AM

Wonderful images, Andrea. Congrats on the win.

David Crandall

June 14, 2025 at 4:34 PM

Great picture! Sounds like a good memory? I remember concord grapes and my grandmother's house, and then later in one of my own houses.

Paula Goldsmith

June 14, 2025 at 11:48 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "grapes" write. I love grapes ice cold. Have a blessed day with your win.......

Crystol Woods

June 14, 2025 at 8:16 AM

Excellent! Grapes might be the best fruit especially when bottled lol! Love the last line...xo

Abdullah Alhemaidy

June 14, 2025 at 7:14 AM

Congratulations! Very sweet haiku :-)

Speaks Volumes

June 14, 2025 at 5:29 AM

congrats ! I love "mouths smudged purple" ~~~They couldn't hide the evidence, heheheh

Tania Kitchin

June 14, 2025 at 5:06 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your first place win with your wonderful haiku.

Oliver Mckeithan

June 14, 2025 at 4:04 AM

Congrats on on the win. Grapes are good. Not much of a sangria fan-like Pinot Noir. Love to eat them

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

June 14, 2025 at 2:23 AM

Expectedly., a beauty was penned Congratulations.

JC Brul

June 14, 2025 at 1:16 AM

I love the sangria sunrise!! I could savor the sweet aftertaste! Congratulations!^___^

Howard Kerr

May 26, 2025 at 5:37 PM

Andrea, So good of you to praise L Letter Link. I appreciate that so much As for your Grapes Haiku all I can say is it is peerless in its picture perfect presentation. Amazing image rich piece Howard

Sam Kauffman

May 26, 2025 at 3:02 PM

So visual and auditory, Andrea! Love it! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!

Andrea Dietrich

May 26, 2025 at 4:11 PM

well, thanks for making it look like I got some extra comments here. hahaha. Your comment showed up three times, but I am not going to complain!! Thanks for seeing my haiku.