Granpa Shreeve

I'll always remember Granpa Shreeve
at Eaton Road,where he+Gran dwelt,
a wide thick trouser buckled belt
no collar,braces+rolled-up shirt sleeve

He kept hens at the bottom of his patch
his soldier's back now bent to stoop,
collecting eggs from his home-coop,
each day letting them out to root+scratch 

Organically grown,fed as range free
a pullet killed as a Christmas treat
each day a fresh egg for dinner or tea

Old-fashioned,a bit of a tartar, 
far-off days..Gran was his domestic martyr

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/3/2011 10:55:00 AM
what a great tribute to him! congrats on a well deserved win! Sharon.
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:49:00 AM
Many congratulations, Brian : )
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Date: 8/2/2011 1:05:00 AM
tops, brian... oh yes!.. heaps of congrats on your amazing award!! :) huggs!
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Date: 8/1/2011 11:22:00 PM
wow, brian, this is really awesome, and a sonnet no less. You surely deserved a win with this finely crafted poem!
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Date: 8/1/2011 11:11:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win!!!!!!!
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Date: 8/1/2011 10:12:00 PM
Congrats on the first place win, Brian! Especially loved the last two lines. Your grandparents would have been proud, I bet! Cyndi
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Date: 8/1/2011 8:50:00 PM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of carol, Brian
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Date: 8/1/2011 6:17:00 PM
A winning congratulations! Caryl
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Date: 8/1/2011 5:51:00 PM
Many Congrats on your first place win in Carol's contest.
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Date: 8/1/2011 4:28:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS for this well-deserved win....~~~smile ~~~~*-*junjun
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Date: 8/1/2011 4:02:00 PM
I feel like I know the man. Wonderful sonnet, Brian. Many congrats on your FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie
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Date: 8/1/2011 3:29:00 PM
I can visualize this grand old man, reminding me of my own Grandpa Martindale (old fashioned, a bit of a tartar...mine was too !) Love this poem!
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Date: 8/1/2011 3:20:00 PM
Way to go Brian...Grandpa's free range eggs would bring a tidy sum in the market today...a visionary before his time! Well done! Bea
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Date: 8/1/2011 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my latest contest Brian. It was very hard choosing the placements as I loved them all. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2011 2:43:00 PM
Congrats Brian on your first place win with this dynamic poetry luv..
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Date: 8/1/2011 12:25:00 AM
Beautiful poem, reminds of my home and growing up. Still have lots of chickens laying eggs in the yard and they scratch and root, benefits from country living. Lovely poem. Thank you Lee
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Date: 7/28/2011 6:06:00 PM
We are too removed from farm life, even if just chickens; it will hurt us in the long run. I bet Granpa Shreeve had insights we lack in our plastic world; Gran too.
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Date: 7/28/2011 4:44:00 PM
a simple poem that says a lot about the simple things in life. i like this, well written, good subject matter, good poetry
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