Granpa Shreeve

I'll always remember Granpa Shreeve
at Eaton Road,where he+Gran dwelt,
a wide thick trouser buckled belt
no collar,braces+rolled-up shirt sleeve

He kept hens at the bottom of his patch
his soldier's back now bent to stoop,
collecting eggs from his home-coop,
each day letting them out to root+scratch 

Organically grown,fed as range free
a pullet killed as a Christmas treat
each day a fresh egg for dinner or tea

Old-fashioned,a bit of a tartar, 
far-off days..Gran was his domestic martyr
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Well Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 10:55 AM
what a great tribute to him! congrats on a well deserved win! Sharon.
Horne Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 10:49 AM
Many congratulations, Brian : )
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 1:05 AM
tops, brian... oh yes!.. heaps of congrats on your amazing award!! :) huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 11:22 PM
wow, brian, this is really awesome, and a sonnet no less. You surely deserved a win with this finely crafted poem!
Baity Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 11:11 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win!!!!!!!
Macmillan Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 10:12 PM
Congrats on the first place win, Brian! Especially loved the last two lines. Your grandparents would have been proud, I bet! Cyndi
Mehta Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 8:50 PM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of carol, Brian
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August 1, 2011 at 6:17 PM
A winning congratulations! Caryl
Osita Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 5:51 PM
Many Congrats on your first place win in Carol's contest.
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August 1, 2011 at 4:28 PM
CONGRATULATIONS for this well-deserved win....~~~smile ~~~~*-*junjun
George   Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 4:02 PM
I feel like I know the man. Wonderful sonnet, Brian. Many congrats on your FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie
Richards Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 3:29 PM
I can visualize this grand old man, reminding me of my own Grandpa Martindale (old fashioned, a bit of a tartar...mine was too !) Love this poem!
Boyle Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 3:20 PM
Way to go Brian...Grandpa's free range eggs would bring a tidy sum in the market today...a visionary before his time! Well done! Bea
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 2:44 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my latest contest Brian. It was very hard choosing the placements as I loved them all. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 2:43 PM
Congrats Brian on your first place win with this dynamic poetry luv..
Ramage Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 12:25 AM
Beautiful poem, reminds of my home and growing up. Still have lots of chickens laying eggs in the yard and they scratch and root, benefits from country living. Lovely poem. Thank you Lee
Smith Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 6:06 PM
We are too removed from farm life, even if just chickens; it will hurt us in the long run. I bet Granpa Shreeve had insights we lack in our plastic world; Gran too.
Cooke Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 4:44 PM
a simple poem that says a lot about the simple things in life. i like this, well written, good subject matter, good poetry
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