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She sat on her front porch swing,
Moving backwards and forwards,
As a heavy bag of cornfield beans
Sat next to her, awaiting stringing

I sat on the floor, engrossed in words
That colored her a soft blue and purple
Colors of whispers that linger inside
Smiling from their wise hues of insight

She began to string the beans, dropping
First the string into the trashcan, then
The broke bean into the massive bowl
That sat there, filling to the brim with beans

I listened to her words of kindness drifting
Through the breeze that cooled the warm
Summer air with breaths of compassion,
An embrace from the sweetness of her grin

She gradually filled the bowl and emptied
The weighty bag so that it was collapsed
And slowly pulled long puffs from a Winston
Her favorite cigarette, her one and only addiction

I sang a silly tune of some sort to her as she
Worked, compelling her to place her hands up
Covering her ears in amusement and truth
As my voice was definitely lacking any rhythm

She labored with her garden the way I might
With some poem that seems to long for my touch
Whispering freshness into the heart and soul
As she graced us all with fresh vegetables

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 6/27/2020 12:26:00 PM
This conveys a summer garden so vividly, I like 'filling to the brim with beans' and 'an embrace from the sweetness of her grin' - such a loving memory!
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Date: 6/25/2020 7:11:00 PM
Beautifully penned tribute to your granny and her garden, Gina! Peace and Light, Gershon
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Date: 6/25/2020 4:13:00 PM
this is just wonderful. What a lovely tribute to your grandma
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Date: 6/25/2020 8:52:00 AM
Regina, your poem is a lovely blend of lyrical and narrative elements, very touching and descriptive. My grandmothers didn't smoke, but one of them loved her Garrett snuff! Janice
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Date: 6/25/2020 7:42:00 AM
Delightful moving story of the past dearest, Regina. How many times haven't I dreamed of my grandmother in similar situations, wishing to relive such enriching moments. Excellent writing. Blessings and hugs xxx.
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