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Premiere Contest Winner''Grandpa's Autumn''

Bird songs drift through the tall trees and
    photographs are floating in my mind and 
                                     conversations echo
        in the deep where crumbling amber leaves fall.
I see an old man with a walker-  a shadow of a man
    his hands are gnarled 
        his words are blurred and meaningless.
At the cottage pier I see him in my mind
                                     beside the flowing river
        the endless winding river . . . 
I miss grandpa most when the leaves are falling
            and horses gallop in the fields, wild and free
                                     oh, grandpa loved his horses.
The bird feeders that grandpa made are empty
                        but hopeful birds are twittering still
 and my grandpa is gone-   yet not gone . . .
    I see him fishing off the pier and walking his dog
sitting at the dining room table until he could not
                                    hold a fork anymore . . .
Then an empty hospital bed with the sun shining in
    a girl weeping at the living room window
                     I see all this in my mind
every memory is whispering to me
       especially when the horses are running free
                                  and leaves are falling . . . 

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May 12, 2017

Free Verse/"Grandpa's Autumn"
Copyright Protected, ID 900126


Submitted to the contest, Sad Free Verse in 2017 Only
sponsor, Laura Loo

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Canerdy Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 8:37 AM
Absolutely BEAUTIFUL, Constance. Congrats on your win. Janice
Hamilton Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 9:34 PM
A wonderful write, congrats on a fine win!
Allison Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 6:05 PM
such beautiful memories Constance many congrats Constance:-) hugs jan x
Krampe Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 4:22 PM
Congrats on your top win, Constance. A beautiful tribute to your grandfather; your love shines through.
Schwartz Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 3:52 PM
Beautiful, just Beautiful.. I hope his horse in heaven takes him to his favorite fishing spot.. Just as the leaves are beginning to fall :) Congrats it def. touched me..
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 3:52 PM
This poem is so lovely Constance. Big congratulations on having it honored in first place! : )
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 3:20 PM
Heartbreaking and nicely done, Broken Wings, congratulations you on your win ~*
Ashley Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 3:03 PM
Beautifully illustrated with words! congratulations on your top win!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 1:02 PM
Memories comfort but also cause sadness. Congrats on your win!
Scars Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 1:26 PM
the horses running free...what a beautiful sight!! (2 soup mails for you- wasn't sure if you got them??? thanks lovely lady ) Luloo
Dew Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 2:11 AM
Wow.. Wow..
Parker Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 3:22 PM
How I envy you, all my grand-parents passed away before my 12th birthday, a beautiful poem dear poet..
Wanter Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 11:23 AM
Great minds and all that! I just posted a "Grandpa" poem and found this one just before. You beat mine! This is sooo tender hearted!
Goff Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 11:04 AM
Constance...must be the water...spring fresh...ignites loving memories in the northland this time of year....my flat is heavenly scented with violet lilacs I picked yest! will git sum white ones and surprise Ma with 'im early am! and always a box o' Whitmans Sampler (she don't like fancy chocolatiers, too rich!)
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