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Grandma's Prayers

Chems ponders his need for a taste; none of his regular pick-uppers are afoot. He really wants his fifth, and he knows he is not supposed to drive, but…. Who will know? It is only a few miles to the liquor store. You are not that drunk, he tells himself. You need a taste. He looks at the clock. The liquor store will be open in twenty-seven minutes. He can be there in eight minutes. He settles back down, and his eyes close. His angels keep him that way until they can bring him home. Knowing he would have not only have killed himself that day, but a family of five. Grandmother’s prayers have kept this family alive, once again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/20/2018 6:31:00 PM
Important message, beautifully penned... and like Connie mentioned- timely!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/21/2018 5:22:00 AM
Thank you Rhona. I am reminded at holiday time of two brothers who had both been drinking. One was late to a family gathering, so the other one jumped in his car to check on him. They both crested at the top of the hill, and ran into each other, both killed instantly thanks to their inebriation. I have never forgotten this.
Date: 11/20/2018 3:55:00 PM
Great job here Caren. It's so important to know when you should NOT get behind the wheel. Grandma may be old but she didn't get that old by being stupid. Thanks for this timely and much needed reminder. God Bless, JB
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/20/2018 6:27:00 PM
You are so welcome. I hope the people who need to remember not to drink and drive are listening to the voice inside that is yelling "no! no! no!"
Date: 11/20/2018 2:54:00 PM
Caren, you have expressed so well how alcohol falsely reasons with the inebriated mind, and that is what gets people killed. Prayer works to keep loved ones safe. I am a true believer of that. I too am that grandma who prays. I loved this beautiful poem with its important message, especially at this time of year as the liquor more freely flows!: ) xxoo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/20/2018 6:28:00 PM
Thank you Connie. I used to have an bit of wine or a taste of a margarita, but I learned my limitation is 1 drink, and if I even have that 1 drink, I often get deathly sick at night so I guess my angels do not approve of me even having one.

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