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Aren't grandchildren marvelous! Spoil them just rotten, then give them back, but they are never forgotten. My maternal instincts are rekindled and who best to let them experience the joy I knew. One of my preferred seasons is pumpkin season, tis for Halloween if for no other reason than to take them out to a pumpkin patch and glean their own monster orange pumpkin for Halloween. I had missed the sounds of laughter of my children, but my grandchildren have filled the empty cauldron. We brought the pumpkins home. For their very first time, curious, they plunge in, eviscerate the slime; doesn't seem all that tasty or appealing at first. With some fallacious explanations they immersed scooping out its seedy, nasty stringy insides. They love to tantalize; well, I'm one who decides. So many questions they asked to bewilder me. A mass with scarlet paint an ugliness they see. Candles flicker a whirling vortex of smoke at first; just in time for the spooky night of October 31st. 6/21/2018

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Date: 6/27/2018 9:20:00 PM
I'm with Viv: well woven, Eve. Perfect choice of subject. Best wishes for a winner in the contest! ~ Gershon
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Date: 6/24/2018 12:55:00 AM
Well woven, Eve, and full of love. Good luck! Viv x
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Date: 6/23/2018 9:13:00 PM
Moving and appealing piece, Eve! Janice
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Date: 6/22/2018 8:50:00 AM
Eve, I think this is a marvelous usage of the challenge words put into a lovely story of a beautiful relationship. Good Luck in the contest xxoo
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Date: 6/22/2018 2:41:00 AM
Lovely verse Eve, you're right, they replace that void your own children leave when they fly the nest. Good luck. Tom
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/22/2018 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Tom so very much for both compliments hugs dear friend
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/22/2018 2:53:00 AM
Well done also on POTD.

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