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Grandma's Dementia

Grandmas in a mild utter confusion
In foolish notion in her delusion
Aboard the ironing board
To catch the surf waves, she roared
In bent knees she went, in her illusion

7/15/2022


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Date: 8/4/2022 3:03:00 PM
Funny yet the thought of losing the mind in old age is scary. Great Limerick. love phyl
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Date: 7/25/2022 12:09:00 PM
May she be blessed... Great limerk
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Date: 7/23/2022 1:13:00 PM
Glad grandma knew what to do with her ironing board, it sounds like more fun than ironing Eve, congrats on your win, love xo
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Date: 7/23/2022 10:31:00 AM
Hi Evie, i dread to hear of this horrid disease , to lose you mind, surely what does want to live for. I love your limerick but i really like the last line - hope you are well my friend, love ya Jennifer.
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Date: 7/21/2022 1:28:00 PM
Hi Eve, this is such a wonderful limerick, worthy of a win in any limerick contest. Loved it. Has to be a fave. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
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Date: 7/20/2022 10:51:00 PM
This is quite fitting to the image ! A demented soul may do many things beyond the limit of rational thinking. Enjoyed your limerick and Congratulations on your win, Eve !
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Date: 7/19/2022 1:43:00 PM
This is GREAT, Eve. HOpe it scored high. Congrats.
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Date: 7/19/2022 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Grandma's Dementia" is a cute write.  Have a great/blessed day..................
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Date: 7/19/2022 6:17:00 AM
I think she’s beyond help… but hey, she seems happy enough. Well done, Eve. Terry
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Date: 7/19/2022 4:23:00 AM
Congratulations! You can hear her delusion!
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Date: 7/18/2022 5:34:00 PM
Wonderful Eve haha. Love this one. Thanks for the laugh, shared with my wife, she also loved it. Boy have we got some real life Dementia stories to share... God bless you.
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Date: 7/16/2022 9:14:00 PM
Hilarious, Eve! What a picture-limerick combo!!
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Date: 7/16/2022 6:07:00 PM
LOL... this one brings me back because of the title... haha... love it. Ann
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Date: 7/16/2022 3:44:00 PM
She looks like she good handle a few waves, even at her age. lol Nice Limerick, Eve. Have a great day! Bill
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Date: 7/16/2022 3:32:00 PM
Sounds like she hasn't forgotten the fun things in life. My mother was the same, Hopefully if I ever get it I will have fun places to go back to. I am not sure the new crop will be able to remember how to even turn on a play station. My Mother could not remember how to work her washing machine. Wonderful poem, hopefully appreciated by many. Best regards David
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Date: 7/15/2022 3:49:00 PM
Oh my... catch the big one... wonderful... I love to iron... my kind of lady... Ann
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Date: 7/15/2022 2:55:00 PM
lol, now that is travelling in style Eve, enjoyed your creative light hearted side, Much love to you, thoughts and prayers, too xo
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Date: 7/15/2022 9:33:00 AM
Ouch! I can see myself doing such a think in the near future -- perhaps not in a skirt. The curse in my genes. Love it! Eve, did you create the image also, or were inspired by it? Joe.
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Date: 7/15/2022 1:06:00 PM
Thank you , Joe, the image is her contest to give you an inspiration of what she’s looking for.
Date: 7/15/2022 3:26:00 AM
Good one, Eve. Fun picture, eh?
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Date: 7/15/2022 1:03:00 AM
She must have been at great loss of memory. Still a deft limerick. Best for a win. Hugs.
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