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Grandma Wiped Away My Tears

"I carry your heart with me (I carry it in my heart). I am never without it." E. E. Cummings Grandma was my hero in childhood days comforting me with hugs, kisses and praise I loved her house because it was so old Sweet peas in her garden, purple and gold She'd brush my hair when it was in tangles let me wear her gems, earrings and bangles And then I mothered her as time unfurled Brushing her long white hair in waves that curled Her tender smile soothed my heartaches and tears Held me in loving arms to stop my fears I will never forget her gentle touch Dear Grandma, I miss you so very much I wept like a child on interment day Wished she was there to wipe my tears away September 16, 2022 Writing Challenge-In My Heart S Forms Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Lost to Heaven - Grandmother Marceline checked with howmanysyllables

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Date: 10/7/2022 12:58:00 PM
Ahh!! Sad. I can feel the emotion of loss but also of a great relationship. Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 10/7/2022 5:53:00 AM
Jenna, a beautiful Sonnet and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - In My Heart - "S" Forms, I was very close to my grandma too, Constance
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Date: 10/5/2022 10:03:00 PM
Congratulations, Jenna. Even at my age, I can still recall my Grandmother's warm embrace: a true sanctuary. :)) Suzette
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/6/2022 6:05:00 AM
Thank you very much, Suz.
Date: 10/2/2022 3:18:00 AM
"Wished she was there to wipe away my tears"...... When a loved one who stood as a source of comfort is gone, it is natural to feel crest fallen. A lovely tribute to your grandmother, Jenna. Congratulations on your top win.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2022 5:38:00 AM
Thank you very much, Valsa.
Date: 10/1/2022 8:43:00 AM
Back to say how delighted I am that this fine poem placed high in Constance's contest. Congratulations, Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2022 5:37:00 AM
Thanks, Milt. I'm honored by your comments.
Date: 9/18/2022 6:16:00 AM
Touching and loving words to show how much your Grandma was loved by you. She sounds like such a Dear and loving person. You were fortunate to have her in your life Jenna, so glad you did and shared a little remembrance of her. Glad to have known her in your precious words. God bless you... and thanks for posting Dear friend...
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/18/2022 10:46:00 PM
She was a wonderfully warm and loving lady. Thanks so much for your sentiments, Michael.
Date: 9/16/2022 9:27:00 PM
A beautiful, loving tribute to your grandmother, Jenna. On my cellphone in Mississippi. So hard to navigate on here, but wanted you to know I read your warm poem.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/17/2022 4:51:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Milt. I hope you're enjoying your visit.
Date: 9/16/2022 4:46:00 PM
So often Grandmas are the most beloved member of the family. Must be about the unconditional love thing. Thanks 4 posting Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/17/2022 4:51:00 AM
She was special to everyone. Thanks, Arlo.
Date: 9/16/2022 3:49:00 PM
Amazing Jenna!! That is a powerful and beautiful tribute to your grandma!!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/17/2022 4:50:00 AM
Thank you, Mark. She was such a beautiful lady.
Date: 9/16/2022 12:43:00 PM
Beautiful tribute Jenna, grandma's are special, the foundation of any family and you never forget them. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/16/2022 12:56:00 PM
Hi Tom. Thanks. It’s so good to hear from you. Safe travels!

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