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Grandiose Wishes

I wish I could capture today A pocketful of azure skies, As I stroll through this scenic way, Store it with photographic eyes, And present it as a surprise; I wish to collect in my hand, Little trinkets of sunshine bright, And gather those sunny pearls grand, Scattered on the lake in dawn’s light, Then none need be scared of the night; I wish to hold a rainbow small, Bottle some lightning and thunder, I wish and wish somehow to ball Some spongy cloud, and then plunder A bit of moon's magic wonder; I wish to store a jar of breeze, Aurora's kiss of freshness sweet, The scent of fresh flowers to freeze, A glass of dew would be a treat; If I achieve these, what a feat!
3rd December 2022 For Emile Pinet's "A Christmas Special" contest

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Date: 12/30/2022 3:44:00 PM
Whimsical and wonderful Jo! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 12/30/2022 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Grandiose Wishes" is a lovely write. Happy New Year 2023 with blessings...............
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Date: 12/30/2022 12:54:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work in Emile contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
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Date: 12/30/2022 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations Jo! Your amazing poem "Grandiose Wishes", has earned a distinguished place in my “Christmas Special ” poetry contest. I was very strict in judging, but your poem rose to the winner's list. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 12/24/2022 4:56:00 PM
It was a treat just reading your grand wishes …if you achieved them, you’d be richer than Bezos and Gates combined:))
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Date: 12/3/2022 8:34:00 AM
All strange and outlandish wishes. But there is no harm in attempting to encase all these forces of nature, if you can :) Quite entertaining and lovely !
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Date: 12/3/2022 5:52:00 AM
A really good piece Jo, with nice rhyme and flow with good imagery too. So enjoyable! Blessings,Gordon
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