Notes About The Poem

Raise your son to be a gentleman. Raise your daughter to accept nothing less. We need to raise ladies and gentlemen!:

- Grandiose - Pleiades G -

Genuine gentleman  

Generation through time 
 
Good lenses, massive  frames

George, with manners and smile  

Gabriella melted  

Genteel manners dazzling  

Golden shower marriage  













- Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
Used and checked on://www.howmanysyllables.com
Each line has 6 syllables
22 words
42 syllables
(poem in the Pleiades form)

30.11.2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Petersen Potter Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Very beautiful poem Anne- Lise! Beautifully painted Pleiades using this time the great letter G, dear friend:) Well done!Just awesome!A 7! And the picture is so enchantingly cute :)) Sending you my love and prayers.Best to you always!Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:)Hugs!D
Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 2:56 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 2:46 PM
A match made in Pleiades heaven.
Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 3:34 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 2:15 PM
Lots of "good" attributes for George to offer Gabriella, Anne-Lise! Love your picture too. A very nice Pleiades and best wishes for the contest! Hugs, Sandra
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 2:51 PM
- Many thanks Sandra, for the friendly visit and great comments on my - Pleiades G - poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 8:58 AM
Very nice a winner already hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 9:02 AM
- Eve, thank you for friendly visits and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 7:02 PM
Good, great golly loved it. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 3:01 AM
- Phyllis, many thanks for the friendly visit and great comments on my - Pleiades G - poetry - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Grasso Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Lovely, Sunshine, very nice! Good luck! It's a winner with me! ...Fran
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 11:35 AM
- Francis, many thanks for the friendly visit and great comments on my - Pleiades G - poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krampe Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Fun pleiades - good luck with the contest. I love to see what everybody is doing with the form.
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 8:08 AM
- Agnes, many thanks for the friendly visit and great comments on my - Pleiades G - poetry - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 3:32 PM
this is a cute one!! Lucky Gabriella
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 8:08 AM
- Many thanks for the friendly visit and great comments on my - Pleiades G - poem Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 3:24 PM
Oh....I love this little piece. All is well that ends well, my dear. Beautiful poem and lovely photo. Thanks for your kindness to me. I've been sick with the flu...so not as active. I'll be back to visiting soon. HUGS
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 8:06 AM
- Many thanks Eileen, for the friendly visit and great comments on my - Pleiades G - poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Godwin Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 12:13 PM
I'm blown away by the number of reads you get on the same day posted. Congrats on that! I'm glad she resumed this fun contest and enjoyed reading your entry. Fun, aren't they? All the best ... CayCay
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 12:21 PM
- Yes, they are fun ... not many contests I participate in ... but this is great :) - CayCay, many thanks for the friendly visit and great comments on my - Pleiades G - poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Fascinating my dearest, Anne-Lise! Good luck in the contest! Hugs xx
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 12:09 PM
- Many thanks my friend Demetrios, for the friendly visit and great comments on my - Pleiades G - poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Canerdy Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 8:27 AM
A 7 for this beautiful, well-written piece, Anne-Lise! Janice
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 12:08 PM
- Janice, many thanks for the friendly visit a 7 and great comments on my - Pleiades G - poetry - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Flats Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 8:24 AM
Very loverly! ~ john
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 12:08 PM
- John, many thanks for the friendly visit and great comments on my - Pleiades G - poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 7:41 AM
What a charming poem Anne Lise and I love the accompanying image:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 12:07 PM
- Many thanks for the friendly visit and great comments on my - Pleiades G - poem Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 6:38 AM
This was great Anne-Lise. It felt so good to read and you did a wonderful job following the format.
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 12:06 PM
- Many thanks Chris, for the friendly visit and great comments on my - Pleiades G - poetry - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pett Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 6:29 AM
Excellent Pleiades, very clever and well written enjoyed.
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 12:05 PM
- Roy, many thanks for the friendly visit and great comments on my - Pleiades G - poetry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 6:05 AM
Very nice Pleiades form ... Good luck ...
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 12:05 PM
- Many thanks for the friendly visit and great comments on my - Pleiades G - poem Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bocsa Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 4:47 AM
Sunshine smiles in the wonderful game of verses like a tempting love of life running the third sense of that golden shower: warm feeling of noble soul.
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 12:04 PM
- Many thanks Ovidiu, for the friendly visit and great comments on my - Pleiades G - poetry - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 4:20 AM
Great poem! And good luck!
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 12:03 PM
- Rick, many thanks for the friendly visit and great comments on my - Pleiades G - poetry - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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