Granda

When the storm clouds gather 
and the thunder rolls, 
when the chips are down and the blood runs cold, 
I hear the click of the walking stick 
and I know I'm not alone. 

Your life with us was long
and now you live
elsewhere but still your calm and strength you give
To us who miss you right down here
for I know I'm not alone.

So as the sea swells high
and the birds take flight,
and the still is gone from the starry night,
I hope that now you can see,
how much you mean to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 5:54 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Dupins Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 1:22 PM
Such a wonderful elegy for your granda. Very descriptive poem as well. Welcome to the soup!
Marks Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 3:20 AM
An Elegy - that's what this called then! Thank you for your encouragement.
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