Grand Canyon Suite

^ ^ From an abyss of the darkness, I hear incantation It slowly ascends, sun awakening canyons, Windward it heralds those sleeping, to wonder.... with a visual score, that deepens with thunder, sweeping me under, to lighten the soul -at first tint of light, my own shadow leans over, to hear a sunrise- Between the chasms of a dream, comes a lark waking day as she follows the river, and the splendor unfolds Sweet sounds to exclaim, this is heaven, displayed! Grand in the sunrise, all creation, beholds! Closing my eyes, hearing trills to be awed Suite bold enchantment, from thunder and drums I will fly with the eagles, over lands of the Gods and will breathe in each movement until my tears overcome
________________________________________________________ Inspired by the Contest: Three Stanza Suite Sponsored by Sheri Fresonke Harper 4/13/14 Stanza 1: Five lines non rhyme Stanza 2: 1 line Stanza 3: 8 lines rhymed (About this poem: Please do watch......it is so worth your moment to listen !!):) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N1l5vgY_3tw ) Grand Canyon Suite: • I. Sunrise • II. Painted Desert • III. On the Trail • IV. Sunset • V. Cloudburst
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Marcum Wong Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 11:58 PM
I can tell how much you were inspired Carrie. This poem gave me chills. It is simply awe inspiring! Congratulations on your much deserved number one spot! I will check out the link.
Guzzi Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 7:40 PM
Thank you Carrie - exquisite, congrads on your win Light & love
Johnson Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:01 PM
Congratulations on your conquest of this contest. A great entry and win. Love, Joyce
Kendrick Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 2:23 PM
Way to go with this excellent winning work..Congrats..Sara
Gorelick Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 8:52 AM
One of my favorite pieces of music.. You've made it into a beautiful poem. congrats. BG
Callus Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 7:07 AM
Just stopping by again to tell you CONGRATULATIONS for the top spot. Looked like a winner from day one:) // paul
Mehta Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:21 AM
Awesome win with three stanza suite. Congrats, Carrie
A. Sharma Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 12:16 AM
Wonderful Carrie , matchless ! I and I loved the one line in the second part the best, congrats on great win !
Poteet Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 10:27 PM
Delightful music and delightful piece. Congratulations on one of your best this year.
Harper Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 8:57 PM
Carrie, first rate poem, I love it that you tied it to such a wonderful suite of music and made your poem almost a painting. Very lovely, congratulations on your win. Thanks for entering my contest.
Horsman Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 5:11 PM
wonderful poetry, ever so visual, who needs the tourist board? this will entice everyone that reads it to go there....i for one...
Trifiatis Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 7:56 AM
Majestic writing competing with the grandeur of the Grand canyon dear Carrie!
Carrillo Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 3:32 PM
A beautiful painting this is. You have captured the beauty of the Canyon, the Sunrise, the Desert and the Sunset, for all of us to see. Great job done here. Again thanks for your prayers... Lucill
Callus Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 2:37 PM
This is so beautiful...your brush did such a great job!! highly rated:) [copied the link and will listen as soon as as possible.] // paul ....ps typo (be) 4th line from bottom(?)
Richards Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 2:41 PM
Thanks so much, Paul, for seeing the typo. I read it more than once, but somehow didn't catch it! So appreciate your keen eye!
Bauer Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 1:22 PM
beautiful! i felt the same way when i visited the grand canyon a couple of years ago, but i didn't express it nearly as eloquently. just gorgeous! (both the poem and the canyon...)
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