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Graceful Deer -- Tanka Contest

Deer are so pretty As they stand against the snow And they are graceful As they leap over fences To come to the stream and drink

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/30/2013 7:04:00 AM
aww..yep.i love love deer..Unfortunately on the island of Malta We dont have them.First time i saw them was in Scothland...I wanted to get out of the car to catch them and hug them..but gee how they ran:).Lovely tanka
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Date: 1/12/2013 10:18:00 PM
yes, they are so lovely and especially to see them outside your window in the snow!! nice poem!
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