Gotta Take Care of Me

These days my home is a disaster where no neatness is mastered.
For years I did the spic and span scene for a spouse who notices 
only the TV screen and our part alien, completely annoying teens.
I eventually deciphered my efforts made none of them nicer or wiser.

I realized that to remain a cleanliness and organizer striver                      would sooner than later require I take a daily tranquilizer.
In time, I learned my bed was quite a smart desire and the 
art of long naps was my perfect mood equalizer.  So, why brood
over other family member's feelings when my own felt nicer.

There was a time when dust bunnies reduced me to shame
but, now they’re just fluffy cuties that I individually name.
Whereas I once frequently behaved like a total grump
because all treated our dining table like the local dump,
I now idly ponder when the pile will style a solid ceiling thump.

Home-nest chores of potential upset-tests no longer interest my 
new style, but soaking in the tub attracts my delight worthwhile.
My bathroom has become my private, pampering isle.
Magazines to thoroughly savor, tempt me in a dream-flavored pile.
Within that little room I’m managing a pampering cocoon.

Once upon my stress time, I would be cryin’ over clothes 
not ironed and family tried neither soothing or inspiring me.
These days my ironing policy is that such is pure folly
and that only laundered attire need be desired.  I no longer 
grow vacuum sore ‘cause rooms are too trashed for dirt to hit floors.
                        
I am learning to keep my child-like, spontaneous smile
despite any and all house or family trials.
If in this lesson I succeed, that’s all I really, truly and mostly need.
I wish to live and love centered in a state of relaxed
‘cause that’s where my spic and span are truly at.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 8/31/2018 12:35:00 AM
"There was a time when dust bunnies reduced me to shame, but now they’re just fluffy cuties that I individually name." This cracked me up Caycay! It took me four months after my knee operation to get my Easter table runner off the table and put on autumn. so I can totally relate to this adorable poem. I'm so happy it was a winner for you. Congratulations my friend. : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/1/2018 9:40:00 AM
This is perfect and made me smile.congrats on your win. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/1/2018 7:31:00 AM
Congrats on a great win, CayCay with this frank write:)
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Date: 7/31/2018 6:51:00 PM
oh Caycay, this is so inventive. I can't picture this being your reality and since I know you only have one adorable older son, that part is fiction for sure!! However, I sense the notes of truth in this too. Not caring so much in house cleaning as before with your concussion?? I never was a good housekeeper but I try to keep up on surface things. SO hard!! I see you got a great win here. AWESOME
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Date: 7/29/2018 2:49:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats CayCay I really loved this one:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/29/2018 12:29:00 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your win. Love the description of your transition to sanity :)
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Date: 7/28/2018 11:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Wonderful! Every stanza I have lived. Well done!
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Date: 7/28/2018 5:47:00 PM
Back with a big congratulations on your win..I should have entered the contest but didn't. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/28/2018 2:58:00 PM
Your poem reads in a relaxing tone..just as you intended..so many relevant details you inscribed..well done, CayCay..best for a win.
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Date: 7/27/2018 11:32:00 PM
This is marvelous, CayCay, it sings to me and so very witty. A winner in my book . Good luck in the contest.. hugs Eve
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Date: 7/27/2018 3:16:00 PM
There's no one more important than yourself, always find me time. Bit of dust never hurt anyone. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 7/27/2018 12:31:00 PM
You really name your dust bunnies, CayCay? When I was in the corps at A&M we called them ghost turds and if you were ever caught with ghost turds under your rack you were in big trouble. Best of luck in the contest. John
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Date: 7/27/2018 12:26:00 PM
Brilliantly penned CayCay I no longer stress over an untidy house - it's a thankless task as it only gets untidy once its been cleaned - having precious 'me' time is far more important my friend so put your feet up, relax and read and write!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/27/2018 12:20:00 PM
I've read things....andt....that was a state of relax......clapclapcllap
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