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Gothic Trilogy the Red Rose of the Cross

She held a knife over my heart and feasted upon my emotions
My blood flowed through her veins
She was insane, beautifully insane
I devoured her visions
She devoured my soul
An axe slices my neck
My head rolls towards an empty tomorrow
My dreams have been stolen
In a coffin of unspoken silence
Run run run, escape the pain
Headless I join her
Totally insane
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 3:47 PM
I think I've totally gone off my head reading this... now for part 3 xx :-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
Lindley Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 12:33 PM
Always feels like that looking back, if you survive it. Many a man has joined in and never wished to leave. I've seen that before myself. Some like the insanity! A7 and a delight to read this creative trilogy!
Vaso Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 3:14 PM
Thanks Robert, this was all purely fiction, I myself like peace and quiet, and no drama!
Smith Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 10:41 AM
Gives me a picture of a dominant wife who wants to change who you are into who they want you to be...never ends well
Vaso Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 3:13 PM
Well this more on the totally insane side of things!
Roberts Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 10:38 PM
Ohh my, so very different .....Seren
Vaso Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 10:40 PM
sure different in an insane kinda way!
Nance Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 9:16 PM
ooohhh....
Vaso Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 9:24 PM
ahhhhhhh ohhhhh
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