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Pick-up line: “Hey baby doll...Can I buy you a drink?”
Reply: “Yes please! After looking at YOU, I need one” 

*For the contest sponsored by Judy Konos

Copyright © Tim Ryerson | Year Posted 2015

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May 6, 2015 at 10:03 AM

Tim :-) Congratulations with your pick up line entry in Judy K's "Fun pick up line" poetry contest. Sweet *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A

May 6, 2015 at 9:30 AM

LOL, Tim you got me laughing. Did she really say that? Congratulations with your awesome pickup line win. Always ~LINDA~

May 6, 2015 at 2:00 AM

Oh my I am thinking that answer could be taken two ways..lol...Seren

May 5, 2015 at 9:14 PM

OUCH! Thank you for being in my contest

May 6, 2015 at 3:03 PM

Thank YOU Judy! I always enjoy entering your contests...

Richard Lamoureux

May 5, 2015 at 7:56 PM

Owwww! Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

May 5, 2015 at 5:09 PM

yours was one of the funniest! BIG congrats. Left a note about Glenn over at mY poem in case you didn't see it.

May 5, 2015 at 4:07 PM

Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve

May 5, 2015 at 2:47 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

May 2, 2015 at 8:08 PM

haha. GOOD ONE.

Barbara Gorelick

May 1, 2015 at 10:30 PM

How rude! But funny. BG

May 1, 2015 at 9:34 PM

LOL aww thats funny

May 1, 2015 at 6:03 PM

ha ha ha:-) Hugs Jan xx Good luck in the contest:-) xx

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