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It was often said, she was my better angel, but terminal illness clipped her beautiful wings As my faithful wife, me she always watched over I wished my dirty snow life had been more clean We made snow angels when we were kids, and I loved how she would look at me with those innocent doe eyes She always forgave me for any wrong I did, even when she had got that dying disease Smiling, she would wipe my tears away whenever I cried I always knew I didn’t deserve her love, her kind-hearted spirit was above my pay grade At her casket, I held her velvet glove ... kissed her hand, and thanked God for letting my dear wife rest pain-free in the shade In my heart, I know I got not my just desserts, it should’ve been me the grave diggers were burying under the earth I live today because her forgiveness of me was heard by God Now my better angel has flown away, and my soul cries daily aloud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/10/2017 9:35:00 AM
Hello Freddie, thisis a sad poem you wrote. yes we miss our loved ones when they pass. Even though my husband did wrong it took me a long time to forgive him. Now that I have, I am moving on. In time you will to. Have a nice day my friend hugs to you you need it .
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Date: 6/8/2017 10:36:00 AM
Read your comment... this was loosely about your mom and dad. Nice writing, my friend.
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Date: 6/8/2017 10:36:00 AM
Read your comment... this was loosely about your mom and dad. Nice writing, my friend.
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Date: 6/6/2017 8:51:00 PM
Very sad but well done nostalgic write Freddie!~Che :)
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Date: 6/6/2017 4:28:00 PM
This was beautiful and I could feel that emotion in the end. Very well done! Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 6/6/2017 9:34:00 AM
This poem has such an impact on the reader. Sad, full of emotion, strongly spoken. Well done!
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 6/6/2017 11:51:00 AM
Ty, Heidi. I feel other people's pain when they lose a dear loved one. And I write as the Spirit moves me. Love always.
Date: 6/6/2017 7:06:00 AM
This is so sad, RW! Very heart wrenching write my friend!
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 6/6/2017 8:06:00 AM
Ty, WW. My wife is still living. This poem is a memorial of how my father feels about his wife (my mother) being dead. It's a reflecting back on his life together w/her. My mother did die not from a terminal illness though. Love always.

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