Goodbyes

Leaving behind buckling barns leaning in weeds grown high,
Tin roofs toned by flaking rust and balanced precariously
On scaly lumber of storm-washed gray,
Endless rows of tan tasseled corn and browning soybeans—
A darkened clump of distant trees,
A froth of dust billowing up behind a dented truck
Held togehter by fading patchwork seams—

When the mind sketches impressions
With farewell glances,
And creates masterpieces from
Emotions thick with vanishing color,

Goodbyes become brutal paintings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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October 31, 2011 at 5:42 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Jo Ann. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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