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Goodbye, Mama

A loving son held Mama's hand and said, "We've such sweet memories. If you feel strong enough today, I'd love to hear your favorites, please." Then like an eager child he leaned a little closer. Mama said, "My precious times with all you kids and your sweet daddy fill my head: the picnics Sunday afternoons, the games of tag and hide-and-seek, sweet watermelons in July, and wading in our backyard creek. Your daddy held us spellbound with his yarns; he spun them on the spot. We watched old Westerns; I recall how you loved Tonto as a tot. (Her voice grew weaker.) What we had was something money cannot buy. Those simple pleasures are the best-- I'm ready, Son, so please don't cry."

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Date: 10/5/2023 12:09:00 AM
When family is a place of love and mutual understanding, all memories are pleasant and one never gets tired pf hearing them articulated over and again. I see an intimate bond between the mother and son here.
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Date: 8/23/2023 7:46:00 AM
This is so heartrending but also so precious. You’ve captured the moment dear Janice. My wife and I have experienced this with our parents.
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