Eamon Duffin Poet Couplet

Goodbye Im Gone

On my knees I kneel and pray
Forgiveness from you today
What I done was truly wrong
Your time now I won’t prolong
How stupid I was and foolish too
That sad sad day that I wed you



(7th in contest,’ Apology Accepted’, by Barbara Gorelick)

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Poet Destroyer A December 2, 2012 at 6:53 PM Eamon.. it is nice to read this oldie and goody couplet. :-) congrats with your wonderful win,, in the "APOLOGY ACCEPTED" contest.. always~ PD

Deb Radke January 7, 2011 at 11:40 AM Very good. Very good sir. I love the punch at the end. Congratulations. Best wishes, Deb

Jimmy Anderson January 2, 2011 at 7:30 PM Thanks for the comments, Eamon. Congrats on the win in Barb's contest. And a Happy New Year to you. ....Jimmy

Francine Roberts December 31, 2010 at 9:45 AM really?? congrats on your win Eamon, it's great

Wilma Neels December 31, 2010 at 8:28 AM Eamon what an interesting apology.. Congratulations on your win in BG's contest! Happy 2011 to you and yours ;-)

Carol Sunshine Brown December 31, 2010 at 6:53 AM Congratulations on your win Eamon in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Apology Accepted". Love Carol

Kash Poet December 31, 2010 at 6:17 AM Congrats Eamon on your well deserved win and wish u a very HAPPY NEW YEAR!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 31, 2010 at 5:21 AM Congrats Eamon on your wonderful win in the Apology Accepted contest with this incredible entry my friend... enjoy your top spot for a top notch entry ..with luv.. and again H.N.Y..too..

Joyce Johnson December 30, 2010 at 10:06 PM Congratulations on tongue in the cheek apology and win. Love, Joyce

Barbara Gorelick December 30, 2010 at 9:39 PM I coulndt decide whether this was funny or sad..but I loved it. Congrats on your 7th place in my contest. BG

Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2010 at 2:12 PM Revisiting this one becuase I liked it so much. I just did mine and I copied your style, of three couplets. You helped me get inspired to think of what to write about!

Virginia Mitchell December 28, 2010 at 3:36 AM That was a surprise ending! :) Good luck in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2010 at 10:28 PM this is excellently witty!! I hope it scores! Luv, Andrea

Constance La France December 27, 2010 at 2:32 PM This sort of made me sad, sad.... well hurray to new beginnings.. best of luck in the contest~~