Goodbye

Good-Bye


Somehow there is a coldness to good-bye
a distance felt within an icy breath
a longing uncontained by endless sky
a labyrinth of darkness at its depth.
Footfalls that echo in memory’s fear
perfumes scent faded from passion worn sheets
haunting thoughts warning the lovers – beware
adrift on the sea of “second thought” fleets.

Somehow there is no warmth within good-bye
cold words that chill the edges of a heart
draw tight the painful bonds that bid them fly
compress the pounding roar that shouts depart.
     Thus frost masks the agony of leaving
      frozen tears the anchored pain of grieving.


9/27/2016

submitted to – Goodbye – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Nayda Ivette Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/29/2016 9:03:00 AM
Wow John, I love this sonnet-such amazing flow :) sadly beautiful...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/29/2016 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations John on the placement of the contest. Goodbyes can be cold as an iceberg.
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John Lawless
Date: 9/29/2016 7:25:00 AM
Nayda, thanks for the opportunity to "let the muse, loose" with this contest theme.
Date: 9/29/2016 3:16:00 AM
I love your take on goodbye John - the imagery is superb and gave me a chill down my spine! Would have been a top spot with me!:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 9/29/2016 7:24:00 AM
Yeah Jan, goodbyes always seem to freeze a moment. Thanks for your continued support.
Date: 9/28/2016 11:21:00 PM
Hi John, This is a well written sonnet. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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John Lawless
Date: 9/29/2016 7:22:00 AM
Thanks Alexis, always nice to hear from you.
Date: 9/28/2016 10:48:00 PM
Very beautiful, John, congratulations on your win : ) Hugs Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/30/2016 1:53:00 PM
Your sonnets have been outstanding
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John Lawless
Date: 9/29/2016 7:21:00 AM
Thanks Eve, your Sonnet contests got me delving deeper into them and kinda enjoying it.
Date: 9/28/2016 2:14:00 PM
Hello John i have entered your contest interesting by my poem titled Luxury was it not good enough ? please explain. thank you
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Date: 9/28/2016 2:13:00 PM
Hello John i have entered your contest interesting by my poem titled Luxury was it not good enough ? please explain. thank you
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John Lawless
Date: 9/28/2016 3:41:00 PM
Talin, I have responded to your question via Soup Mail
Date: 9/28/2016 10:21:00 AM
Love it. Best wishes John...
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Date: 9/28/2016 10:04:00 AM
Great sonnet,John, well crafted! Should do well in the contest!
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Date: 9/28/2016 9:05:00 AM
Excellent sonnet, John. I too think goodbyes signal finality. Good luck!
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