GOODBYE

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GOODBYE

(NOTHING MORE TO SAY)

I've seen the way you look at me
I've seen the way you look at them
Without wanting to admit, you hate everything I stand for
Lying to yourself, you are sweet, caring and better
Still, you look at me and hate everything I stand for
You are a cheat - A liar - A toilet flushing down rain

You seek and want my attention, yet you have no domain
Your THANK YOU's are cheaper than a grin on a Walmart bag
The light - The light - That shines upon your expression
Nothing more than.....
Sour grapes traveling towards the darkest region of the sun
Yes, simple prunes basking all the time!!!!!
Shaking powdered grapes from lobe to lobe
Watching humping wild hogs who can't eat cake
---Desperately you mock yourself---

Before you draw a blank, let me remind you
You look at me and hate everything I stand for
The way I smile, carry myself every day
I never claim to be perfect, but better with no anvil
You can't bear the way I stand in front of the soap display
I embrace with all my spirit, at the end of every day
I'm so glad I am nothing like you or them
In reality, I judged you the moment you walked in

Before the year ends, I will end my affair right here
I have nothing more to say
I hope you all have a great new year.

TaTa SKAT in the Hat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 12/3/2017 6:52:00 PM
"Goodbye Ruby Tuesday, who could hang a name on you..?"
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Date: 12/3/2017 6:54:00 PM
I like Wal-Mart bags
Date: 12/3/2017 5:14:00 PM
Great write, Skat. Such feeling comes from honest hearts.
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Date: 11/6/2017 9:56:00 AM
As only Boot Skat N Boogie could say it! Cheers!
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Date: 11/3/2017 9:04:00 PM
I LIKE RHYMING NO TIME 4 CRIME BE SWEET AND NEAT ON YOUR FEET WITH A TREAT THEN GET ON YOUR SEAT OFF YOUR FEET
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Date: 10/31/2017 8:47:00 PM
Loved this piece!! It was raw, witty, imaginative, and had great imagery. The repetition of the notion that the antogonist "hates everything you stand for" is so powerful against your ironic ending where you say, "I judged you from the beginning." Excellent write!! Thanks for sharing!!
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Date: 10/25/2017 2:18:00 PM
Made me giggle and Sad. Love your writing..
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Date: 10/6/2017 6:00:00 AM
Like your poem and style of writing. I haven't posted anything here in a long time but somehow found it again and noticed you left me a comment. I appreciate it and am going to start posting here again.
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Date: 10/2/2017 7:20:00 AM
nice one. i often say i like people who don't like people. please see and/or comment mine, if feasible, on poetrysoup for daniel schack. be well .
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Date: 10/1/2017 10:22:00 PM
SKAT A, I feel your deep emotions loudly and clearly and I hear your voice as you express your most deepest feelings. liberty justice
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Date: 9/14/2017 7:50:00 PM
hey SKAT,,you can't leave us,i'm back need more of your poetry
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Date: 8/6/2017 12:07:00 PM
Seems to be about a break up. Sarcastic n eloquent. Your wording impressive. Glad it's not a farewell to soup my friend. See so many read your work, they admire it. Keep it up. Kudos. Nice to read from u again. Pls do write your thoughts about my latest poem too, under it.
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Date: 7/28/2017 11:59:00 AM
Great poem, i do believe many and i can relate to this...:)
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Date: 7/23/2017 1:36:00 PM
This is fierce and the angst are express widely. I can feel the emotions. Great writings SKAT. GOD BLESS.
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Date: 7/14/2017 1:33:00 PM
This piece is simply remarkable.
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Date: 7/11/2017 1:43:00 PM
lol ... all writes write on ... very stirring right . .... you got some pretty cool phrases off in this write ... hey ... good luck poet ...
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Date: 7/10/2017 8:35:00 PM
Master ink
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Date: 7/9/2017 10:45:00 AM
This is like something I'd write about my last break up, it made me feel something so it's art ?? I'm back and writing again so that means I'll be reading a bunch too ??
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Date: 6/29/2017 7:40:00 PM
If I'm worth it for you to endure another day with me; you might as well consider staying till the new year my love. Judge me but don't condemn me yet. I will try and change for good. Don't leave me. baby!.... nicely penned dearie
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Date: 6/21/2017 10:01:00 AM
. . .where's my severance pay??
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Date: 6/16/2017 4:39:00 PM
C'mon, SKAT! Don't cut us all off. And if you must build a wall, be sure to build a a good gate and oil it frequently so it doesn't squeal so loud it awakens the neighbors. The way it is now, you have no way to vent. ......I hope you find your way. RAY
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Date: 6/14/2017 6:27:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, remember the break up is never easy especially when you loved somwone with all your heart however I m new and have a poem I shall never see you again of breakup category, I wanted you to read it and tell me how you feel about it
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Date: 6/5/2017 12:43:00 AM
Come back please??????great work.
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Date: 5/28/2017 6:28:00 AM
Hi SKAT, Never say goodbye! Relations are not made for break-up, they are made to be kept forever!!! This is how I feel. Good work my friend!
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Date: 5/25/2017 9:37:00 AM
So many people including me can relate to your post SKAT. I though this is a place i could express my thoughts but realized i am speaking with a blocked ears. Ears that only resonate wth certain sounds....Unfortunately...as a Poet, i don't have only one, but many... hope you come back and share your talent with us.
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Date: 5/22/2017 2:39:00 PM
SKAT -- Billy the kidster is in a bad way. He's talking not only about depression, but of his heart pounding out of his chest and I'm very worried. If you or PD have his actual phone number --- please call him. He has taken medication and has mentioned he may have passed out! I have no idea when or if you'll read this. I don't know Billy well, but I am very worried. _ cyndi
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