Goodbye

in a giant bird as my home state drifts away . . . my memories stay .

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Date: 9/19/2023 2:15:00 AM

Great:)

Date: 9/18/2023 3:37:00 AM

Very creative one which I would say is stemming from your stress at this time in your life. How is everyone doing? Sara

Date: 9/18/2023 2:29:00 AM

Beautiful indeed

Date: 9/17/2023 8:33:00 PM

A beautiful senryu to embrace those memories, a very heartfelt emotion. I hope you had a wonderful time dear :) sending love ~ Hiya

Date: 9/17/2023 8:19:00 PM

Ria... Hope you had great time at reunion... Hugs... ~ Ani

Date: 9/17/2023 4:53:00 PM

Have a great time at your reunion Andrea, hugs

Date: 9/17/2023 3:16:00 PM

hope you have a super time Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/17/2023 4:25:00 PM

It's over now. I am in Texas. Halfway home. They made me come to Dallas first

Date: 9/17/2023 1:55:00 PM

Hope you had a nice weekend away Andrea

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/17/2023 4:25:00 PM

Yes it was wonderful

Date: 9/17/2023 1:13:00 PM

- The memories will never die ... great writing, Andrea :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/17/2023 4:26:00 PM

Thank you