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Good Man

I've always tried to love And be loved from above But some things don't happen The glimmering sun can testify I lye alone in this cave Buried in death's grave No man can ever imagine The pain that's felt The serene breeze clogs my nostrils To remind us that life's a fossil That only the brightest could understand Before they are obliterated and buried Depression is the worst custom One could experience and blossom With until the day he dies If you felt these feelings, remember... Hope is a good thing, and no good thing ever dies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/7/2016 3:44:00 AM
I've been good mate, was helping a friend today erect a mongolian tepee, . 7 meters in diameter, it's huge! he already has a tepee in the bush where he lives, so how is life treating you mate?
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Morgen Farmer
Date: 10/7/2016 10:16:00 AM
Awesome glad you both got that teepee up. Life is decent.
Date: 10/7/2016 2:34:00 AM
Spoken like 'a good man' and yes there is always hope... nice job Morgen /|\
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Morgen Farmer
Date: 10/7/2016 3:26:00 AM
Thank You Rick. How have you been? Poetry is amazing, allows to rid our pain into words.

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