Good Man

I've always tried to love
And be loved from above
But some things don't happen
The glimmering sun can testify

I lye alone in this cave
Buried in death's grave 
No man can ever imagine
The pain that's felt

The serene breeze clogs my nostrils 
To remind us that life's a fossil
That only the brightest could understand 
Before they are obliterated and buried

Depression is the worst custom
One could experience and blossom
With until the day he dies
If you felt these feelings, remember...
Hope is a good thing, and no good thing ever dies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 7, 2016 at 3:44 AM
I've been good mate, was helping a friend today erect a mongolian tepee, . 7 meters in diameter, it's huge! he already has a tepee in the bush where he lives, so how is life treating you mate?
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October 7, 2016 at 10:16 AM
Awesome glad you both got that teepee up. Life is decent.
Wolf Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 2:34 AM
Spoken like 'a good man' and yes there is always hope... nice job Morgen /|\
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October 7, 2016 at 3:26 AM
Thank You Rick. How have you been? Poetry is amazing, allows to rid our pain into words.
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