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Impressed upon the veins of leaf - crayons in chubby hands. “Good grief,” of Charlie Brown - a Fall motif. Impressed upon, the veins of leaf - the great pumpkin childhood belief. Impressed upon, the veins of leaf - crayons in chubby hands. “Good grief!” 10/5/2022
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Date: 10/6/2022 6:08:00 PM
You really pulled this one off, Kim. So sweet ~
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Date: 10/6/2022 1:54:00 PM
An excellent Triolet with overtones of Hallowing, dearest Kim. Blessings!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2022 4:24:00 PM
Blessings! Thank, dear friend!
Date: 10/6/2022 1:21:00 PM
- As a child I never saw a pumpkin ... don't think they existed in Norway then - Lovely writing, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2022 4:26:00 PM
We all have different experiences. I made myself some pumpkin pancakes yesterday.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2022 4:24:00 PM
We all have different experiences. I made myself some pumpkin pancakes yesterday.
Date: 10/6/2022 1:01:00 PM
Ha. So you got fooled into believing the myth? I think it was until age 8 I believed in Santa. well done.I guess it's not for Constance's contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2022 4:26:00 PM
LOL, no…but I did enjoy the episode! Who doesn’t love Peanuts. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 10/6/2022 6:45:00 AM
Kim, it was a lovely triolet. It's almost Halloween, which means it's time to start carving pumpkins into lanterns.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2022 7:01:00 AM
Truly! :) Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 10/6/2022 6:00:00 AM
Lovely triolet.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2022 7:00:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 10/6/2022 5:47:00 AM
I will be sitting in the pumpkin patch again this year....Awaiting the arrival of .....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2022 7:00:00 AM
LOL! It may be a long wait. Bring some candy corn or other treat ;)

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