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Gonna B Hot

Billowing bellows
Blatantly belching
Blowing cold air
Blazing the fire.

Bloated to bursting
Building the heat,
Burning the charcoal
Browning the meat.

Burgers are ready
Bangers are hot,
Bread buns are toasted
Brown sauce in the pot.


12/7/2020
Eve roper
Alliteration contest

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Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 2/9/2021 2:57:00 PM reeled me in with the title there, thought it was a saucy scorcher, but there was sauce in the last line lol :) Login to Reply Simon Hamill Date: 2/9/2021 4:19:00 PM You can't use hot sauce on here.lol.:):):)

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/25/2020 3:13:00 PM I like the flow of the b alliteration winning work. Congrats. Sara Login to Reply Simon Hamill Date: 12/25/2020 4:17:00 PM Thank you.im new,but I am learning lots about different types of poems.hope your having a great Christmas.simon:)

Emilia James Date: 12/24/2020 1:51:00 AM Nicely and creatively done Simon, congratulations on your well deserved win, Emilia : ) Login to Reply

Jo Chamberlain Date: 12/23/2020 1:50:00 AM Fantastic! I can't wait for the summer. Congratulations on your winning placement. Login to Reply Simon Hamill Date: 12/23/2020 12:25:00 PM Thank you Joanna.cant beat a barbecue.have a great Christmas.simon:)

Beata Agustin Date: 12/22/2020 9:49:00 PM Wow! Congrats! Cheering you amidst blest Christmas spirit, while sharing with you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you. Login to Reply Simon Hamill Date: 12/22/2020 10:58:00 PM Thank you.hope you have a great christmas.god bless.simon

Eve Roper Date: 12/22/2020 7:51:00 PM Simon, congratulations on your win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Simon Hamill Date: 12/22/2020 10:56:00 PM Thank you eve.and thank you for my placement.hope you have a wonderful christmas.god bless.simon

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/8/2020 10:54:00 AM I think this is so creative, Simon. An allitertive taste treat for sure -- Time to eat! G.L. in the contest, Gershon Login to Reply Simon Hamill Date: 12/8/2020 11:33:00 AM Thanks gershon.it was fun.i am learning so much.ive purchased a book on all the different types of poems.lol.take care.simon

J. Summers Date: 12/7/2020 1:02:00 PM Oh yeah, a BBQ poem. What’s not to like. Login to Reply Simon Hamill Date: 12/7/2020 5:01:00 PM Hi.you can't beat a good BBQ.lol. I'm quite new to all this,never heard of a alliteration poem. I'm learning a lot on here,some really people.thank you.take care.simon