Simon Hamill Poet Alliteration

Gonna B Hot

Billowing bellows
Blatantly belching
Blowing cold air
Blazing the fire.

Bloated to bursting
Building the heat,
Burning the charcoal
Browning the meat.

Burgers are ready
Bangers are hot,
Bread buns are toasted
Brown sauce in the pot.


12/7/2020
Eve roper
Alliteration contest

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Charlotte Puddifoot February 9, 2021 at 2:57 PM reeled me in with the title there, thought it was a saucy scorcher, but there was sauce in the last line lol :) Simon Hamill February 9, 2021 at 4:19 PM You can't use hot sauce on here.lol.:):):)

Sara Kendrick December 25, 2020 at 3:13 PM I like the flow of the b alliteration winning work. Congrats. Sara Simon Hamill December 25, 2020 at 4:17 PM Thank you.im new,but I am learning lots about different types of poems.hope your having a great Christmas.simon:)

Emilia James December 24, 2020 at 1:51 AM Nicely and creatively done Simon, congratulations on your well deserved win, Emilia : )

Jo Chamberlain December 23, 2020 at 1:50 AM Fantastic! I can't wait for the summer. Congratulations on your winning placement. Simon Hamill December 23, 2020 at 12:25 PM Thank you Joanna.cant beat a barbecue.have a great Christmas.simon:)

Beata Agustin December 22, 2020 at 9:49 PM Wow! Congrats! Cheering you amidst blest Christmas spirit, while sharing with you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you. Simon Hamill December 22, 2020 at 10:58 PM Thank you.hope you have a great christmas.god bless.simon

Eve Roper December 22, 2020 at 7:51 PM Simon, congratulations on your win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve Simon Hamill December 22, 2020 at 10:56 PM Thank you eve.and thank you for my placement.hope you have a wonderful christmas.god bless.simon

Gershon Wolf December 8, 2020 at 10:54 AM I think this is so creative, Simon. An allitertive taste treat for sure -- Time to eat! G.L. in the contest, Gershon Simon Hamill December 8, 2020 at 11:33 AM Thanks gershon.it was fun.i am learning so much.ive purchased a book on all the different types of poems.lol.take care.simon

J. Summers December 7, 2020 at 1:02 PM Oh yeah, a BBQ poem. What’s not to like. Simon Hamill December 7, 2020 at 5:01 PM Hi.you can't beat a good BBQ.lol. I'm quite new to all this,never heard of a alliteration poem. I'm learning a lot on here,some really people.thank you.take care.simon