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Dearest ... I see you there, Hiding behind your happiness ... I wonder ... what do you do when alone? Those middle-of-the-night wakes, armored knight fast a-dreaming, Nothing but a house full of compromises, half-truths, And somewhere, lurking ... a monster ... A terrifying fiend, shadowed and cold, As safe as you, within your walls. Pray, does it whisper to you in the silence? Does it whimper in the rain, like an orphan, forsaken? Does it cry to you in the sweetest songs of your memory, Daubed like a parody of passion on your lover's lips? Every thought you give it, every momentary consideration, Is food in its belly, and the blood to bind its marrow ... For it dances even now, wearing moonlight like a second skin, Taunting your soul's sanctity - a scarecrow in the wind, The terrible truth of your twilight transgressions, A reality of concessions, of true love ... Sacrificed. Submitted on April 29, 2020 To the "Strand Pick H, Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest Brian Strand, Sponsor.

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Date: 5/1/2020 10:37:00 AM
Greg, I loved your poem, and congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest _Constance
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 7:50:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Constance - much appreciated, Dear Poet! <3
Date: 4/30/2020 11:15:00 PM
Powerful pictures, great imagery! Congratulations Gregory. The shape of the poem really adds to the flow.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 7:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam, I thought it needed some "smoothing", and that it might help. Blessings and thanks for noticing, Friend!
Date: 4/30/2020 12:30:00 PM
Beautiful poetry, Greg:-) "For it dances even now, wearing moonlight like a second skin, Taunting your soul's sanctity - a scarecrow in the wind" LOVE these lines! Really awesome.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 7:49:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Sir Edward - blessings, my friend! (Can't believe I missed your contest - ugh!)
Date: 4/30/2020 12:33:00 AM
Fascinating lines.. This is awesome, so awesome.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 7:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Funom, I greatly appreciate it! :o)

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