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Gone Forever

1. From a happy childhood, safe and loved, I’ve come a long, long way. But I recall those toothsome times with sunshine all the day. The woes and troubles of the world, were kept from my young ears. Ogres were only in story books and were no cause for fears. 2. Young children snatched from out our yards and spirited away. The freedom that I had in youth cannot be theirs today. This lovely world God gave us has been almost destroyed by war. It truly seems a grievous sin to be happy anymore. When there is hunger everywhere and illness, sadness, tears, even a beloved home is not a refuge from our fears. 3. It’s been ten years September Eleven, since complete madness began. Our safe world is gone forever caused by savagery of man.

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Date: 9/21/2011 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations in the contest of Nancy Jones "A Toothful Ode" Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2011 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Nancy, Joyce
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Date: 9/18/2011 3:59:00 AM
Joyce congrats on your teriffic win..David
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in the Toothful Ode contest sponsored by Nancy Jones. CR
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Date: 9/17/2011 6:53:00 PM
in a nutshell the savage beast in man, Great poetry cousin Joyce, well said here!
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Date: 9/17/2011 5:02:00 PM
Moving write, Joyce. Thanks so much for supporting my contest. Namaste~N
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Date: 9/17/2011 4:49:00 PM
CONGRATS JOYCE ON YOUR HM IN ODE CONTEST WITH ANOTHER BEAUTY MY FRIEND..
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:39:00 AM
Oh I Do So Agree.Friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/21/2011 11:08:00 PM
You have penned a sad but beautiful verse on the truth of our condition today. Thanks for saying it like it is.
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Date: 8/21/2011 11:08:00 AM
A good reflection of the sad events of today Joyce..and yet things could be better,
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Date: 8/20/2011 6:20:00 PM
Great one that reminds us again of that terrible time..We will never be the same..Sara
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:44:00 PM
Very intense thoughts Joyce. You've made them into a compelling poem
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Date: 8/19/2011 7:42:00 PM
an excellent recollection of how things used to be and have progressed to the savagery of man .. an excellent entry Joyce..good luck my friend..
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Date: 8/19/2011 3:40:00 PM
Beautifully written. However as we live in a cycle of hate, which a few individuals profit from enemies are manufactured for us to fight. Every event in which life ends is tragic however violence only begets more violence and in turn victims' families want revenge which will in turn beget only more violence. If we worked to help life instead of kill it, there would be few a loony who would have a reason to commit violence anymore.
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Date: 8/19/2011 3:39:00 PM
9/11 truly changed the way we see life, Joyce. Where there once was trust, now there is skepticism. Those "comforts" we knew as children will never return I fear. Stunning write, dear friend. The savagery of man will be addressed on Judgment Day! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/19/2011 2:41:00 PM
Aptly and well written. However, this 'complete madness' began long before the dawn of civilization. We have just become far more efficient lately. My dream is that one day our robots will fight their robots, and we can attend to our business.
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