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Gone Fishing-Upside Down World

To say the world is an odd place'
is to say it may or may not rain tomorrow
There is the dilemma,
for nothing about the world
between birth and death is understandable

As an example
A young man walked into  a store
where I was waiting to check out
hanging from both his ears were massive
ear rings,
the kind wore to only get attention
and attention he got, from me and 
a couple of others
the guy behind me said "those have to hurt"
I just nodded
the young man must have heard us
so he spoke with a proud voice " pretty cool ear rings
don't you think"
and I replied as dry as I could " I don't know
if you really wanted to be cool 
you would have worn eagle claw fish-hooks
with live worms hanging from them"
"Wow" was his reply..impressed by how out there
that would have been
My thought was how crazy is it that me
a normal guy could be crazier than the guy
wanting to be crazy
then I said " maybe you should go fishing more often"
with that I wanted to tell him there is a fine line between fishing
and sitting on the bank holding on to a piece of string
I afraid this guy is going to go through life
holding on to a piece of string, 
never to catch a fish, it's more important to get attention
than to actually catch something
What an upside down world we live in

2/27/17 contest Upside Down World

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/14/2017 3:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Frederic! I sure enjoyed your amusing poem. Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/13/2017 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your thought provoking win Frederic!! It makes me wonder what would have happened if the man in the story had ventured to ask and take the young man fishing...there's always hope. :) Well done. Deb
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Date: 3/12/2017 5:57:00 PM
Great write Frederick, I really enjoyed this one, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 3/9/2017 9:06:00 PM
hahaha. I LOVE this.
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Date: 2/28/2017 9:01:00 AM
Frederic, I fear we are dinosaurs. I only hope we can stay away from the tar pits. Enjoyable and humorous write:)
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Date: 2/27/2017 2:27:00 PM
Ha! Great story, Frederic. As for seeking attention - I'd say at least let's wait until the bills are paid.
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Date: 2/27/2017 2:21:00 PM
What a fantastic poetic story Frederic and perfectly written for the contest. Good luck my friend.
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