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Gone

No time for breakfast, snatch a cereal bar, anger at mislaid keys to the car. He vents his spleen at anything that moves she dishes out a look that disapproves. The children eat their toast, their heads kept down until the door slams as he leaves for town. Alone, mid-morning, ploughing through the chores her revery broke with knocking at the door. Policemen on the step, their faces grim mouths never moved, but eyes said 'it was him'. The first of many tears now glazed her cheek, she crumpled just as they began to speak. In case it be your last, maybe do this- start each day with ' I love you' and a kiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/17/2016 4:01:00 PM
So true. In this ole world, one is not guaranteed another breath. So when hugging and kissing loved ones when departing to work, play or jog, should be a mainstay.
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Date: 10/14/2016 3:05:00 AM
Time to send a 'Love you' mail to my loved one.... It's true, you never know.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/14/2016 10:59:00 PM
Good move, Darren. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 10/12/2016 9:15:00 PM
Its so true how we tend to overlook our loved ones in the rush of this rat race! Very nice Viv!:)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/12/2016 9:46:00 PM
Thanks, Cheryl, I thought of this after seeing news of a horrendous week of car crashes, and a biker we saw being retrieved from under a truck as we came back from the coast last week. Viv x

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