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"I carry your heart with me(I carry it in my heart)I am never without it" Quote _ by E.E. Cummings Gone are beautiful eyes, azure like the skies whispers of light, lovely as the silent night memories kiss away doubts as they chastise reminding me that she loved with all her might Gone are warm hands, caressing, embracing me coloring each dream with blessings, revealing breathless praises, amazing, always carefree reassuring she loved with so much feeling Gone are the kindest thoughts, bright wonders of love poured out on the soul, abiding through it all twinkling like the starry sighs, shining above reawakening with her soft Southern drawl Gone, lost to heaven, the sweetness of her touch Grandmother's charm, gone - oh, I miss her so much! Writing Challenge- In My Heart- S Forms - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Lost to Heaven - Grandmother/Grandfather FORM: Sonnet - Italian (11 syllables per line) September 3, 2022

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Constance La France

Date: 10/7/2022 5:58:00 AM

Gina, a beautiful Sonnet and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - In My Heart - "S" Forms, I feel your pain and grief, Constance

Suzette Richards

Date: 10/5/2022 10:28:00 PM

Congratulations, Regina. A touching tribute to someone who you loved dearly. A grandmother is often the touchstone of our formative years. :)) Suzette

P.S. Awtry

Date: 9/3/2022 11:45:00 AM

What a tender tribute to your grandmother. Thank you for sharing your memories of this sweet lady with us :) ps