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Golden In the Shade - Tanka

I've stirred up the dust where I used to turn him loose so he could run free- Squirrels may be glad he is gone but leaves have gilded his grave Sitting in the shade I feather grass with fingers, feeling soft, long ears--- I can almost feel the thump of his tail against my legs _________________________________________ 4/22/14 For Contest Sponsored By Amy Green

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Date: 4/24/2014 4:08:00 AM
so poignantly sad yet lovely I admit I shed a few tears the loss of a pet is so hard Carrie an outstanding write hugs
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Date: 4/24/2014 3:08:00 AM
And I could just imagine all this-- and now I miss having a dog-- I love that line about leaves gilding his grave... this is such a touching tribute for your dog-- can I hazard a guess and say he was a Golden Retriever? It is not so hard to believe that you once wrote a haiku on a window, I really do think it was a beautiful haiku!
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Date: 4/23/2014 3:09:00 PM
Emotive work that you have penned for this contest..I can just feel the emotion flow from the page..Reads like a winner to me.Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/23/2014 11:09:00 AM
So cute!
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Date: 4/23/2014 7:34:00 AM
Very pleasing picture you have created, carrie
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Date: 4/23/2014 1:41:00 AM
So touching and with heartbreak. What I wrote once: "Our dogs treasure us each day, as if there's no tomorrow. And we cherish them, hoping there never will be.
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Date: 4/22/2014 11:03:00 PM
Carrie, this is absolutely gorgeous. What a poignant way to write of a pet. WOW. BEST so far!!!
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