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~ keeping in mind when life felt calm ~                                          
            the pace, slow and steady

 

- like traveling back in time,
       to 
            a
         season
   of   vivid   colors, 
         
  the aroma of autumn. 
            
     thoughts reflect
          laughter,
   as leaves    crumble
beneath   t i n y   feet.
        
              the  
  ( simple moments )
           of life.
        
         each one
            being,
               a 
            gentle 
        reminder of
              
          - p u r e -
          innocence.
  

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golden echo

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- like traveling back in time,
       to 
            a
         season
   of   vivid   colors, 
         
  the aroma of autumn. 
            
     thoughts reflect
          laughter,
   as leaves    crumble
beneath   t i n y   feet.
        
              the  
  ( simple moments )
           of life.
        
         each one
            being,
               a 
            gentle 
        reminder of
              
          - pure -
         innocence.
  

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~ keeping in mind when life felt calm ~
            the pace, slow and steady

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Joe Maverick August 2, 2026 at 11:06 AM Wow its good..I'm feeling overwrought though.' Its a poetic thing i guess shat with trying to save peoples homes too Much rock face life..Oh well better days Ahead maybe.? Oh damn i've just remembeted burnham is in uk office.!!! Brandy Nicole August 4, 2026 at 7:15 PM Thank you, Joe. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

James Peranteau January 25, 2026 at 4:09 AM in this case dear poet; thuh form you chose matterz not, 'cauze, you excite'did mine think with everything you've posted, ...save thuh umbrella in your photo...i exspecially would have love'd tuh see the girl'z tressez wet..lol...sorry...if'n yuh don't know edvard by now, your in for thuh shock...women move mine think... i can smell hern redolence, i mean; uv thuh beauty around her, i can hear her tiny feets 'gainst thuh wet...thanx for trap'n me in this write...i gottuh roll...much love...p.s...this iz why i don't comment much, i can't stop writing my think when i come across a write I really like...okay bye ') Brandy Nicole January 27, 2026 at 5:36 PM James, I completely understand, and it's okay if you have so much you want to say. When you find a poem that speaks to your heart, the words simply overflow. You're able to visualize the moments within, as rain surrounds this woman in the photo. Such vivid images you paint, my dear friend. I appreciate you and your kind thoughts. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Paghunda Zahid January 7, 2026 at 11:56 AM Wow, wow Brandy Nicole January 9, 2026 at 7:07 PM I'm smiling. : ) The best compliment is when you've left the reader speechless. Thank you, Paghunda. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos December 3, 2025 at 12:15 AM I love yor poem brandy - LIFE WAS slower, calmer, things and people in life held more meaning, seasons more defined, the word Love meant exactly that, not love ya, see you GIVING FLOWERS WAS A HEART FELT ACTION, NOT AN OBLIGATON, and so much more. Hope you are well my dear friend, the media has spoilt a lot for us. Love and hugs Brandy, Jennifer. Brandy Nicole December 6, 2025 at 5:50 PM Dear Jennifer, you're right about so many things have changed. Seems many have forgotten the true meaning of love, giving, being kind and showing compassion. The internet hasn't helped, for sure. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. : ) Hugs, Brandy

David Crandall November 21, 2025 at 6:20 PM Nice - reminds me of idyllic childhood memories! Brandy Nicole November 22, 2025 at 6:33 PM I appreciate you saying that, David. I'm so happy that these words could bring back such memories. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Abdullah Alhemaidy November 13, 2025 at 1:25 PM Very nice read! Golden poem :-) I love to read it again. A favorite for sure dear lovely sweet Brandy! Pleasure to read you as always lovely poetess! Have a wonderful season and nice cherished memories ~ hugs AA Brandy Nicole November 14, 2025 at 5:45 PM A ' golden poem ' That's so kind of you to say, AA. : ) I'm smiling. This time of year is wonderful indeed. So many beautiful moments are shared and memories are made. Thank you my sweet friend, for your lovely comment, and for placing this in your favorites. For all your compliments as well. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Sam Kauffman November 13, 2025 at 12:06 PM Oh, Brandy, my friend, I love this poem that captures the best of autumn. It brings me back to my love of autumn as a child - to a time of innocence! Well done, dear friend. Sending you blessings of autumn joy and beauty.! Brandy Nicole November 13, 2025 at 6:17 PM Dear Sam, your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. : ) Moments should be cherished and embraced in this way. Simple and with tenderness. I'm happy that you were able to reflect back to those memories. Autumn blessings to you with soft hugs. : ) Brandy

Sara Kendrick November 12, 2025 at 4:28 AM I like this one. Autumn can be a special time of when the heat of summer leaves and the days are warm but not too hot and the beauty of autumn leaves. I enjoyed reading this one. It felt calming to me. Way to go. Sara K Brandy Nicole November 13, 2025 at 6:04 PM Dearest Sara, this time of year is beautiful, festive and vibrant. I'm enjoying the temp change, pleasant, yet somewhat cooler. Nature is rearranging the colors, indeed. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Christopher Delegans October 27, 2025 at 9:54 PM My favorite season for many reasons! Great poem on the best season. Nice done, Brandy. Brandy Nicole October 30, 2025 at 2:06 PM Hi Christopher, this season is beautiful in many ways. A favorite of mine as well. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy

Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2025 at 12:09 AM So sweet and succinct. Much enjoyed Brandy Nicole October 30, 2025 at 2:04 PM Dear Andrea, your thoughts are greatly appreciated. My best to you, always. :) Hugs, Brandy

Gordon Mcconnell October 21, 2025 at 4:31 AM Such a beautiful piece Brandy, really good insightful line of thought with lovely flow throughout this classic gem. Hugs and blessings, Gordon Brandy Nicole October 21, 2025 at 6:57 PM Dear Gordon, your kindness is always appreciated. Thank you for saying this is insightful, along with a classic gem. So sweet of you. Hugs and blessings to you as well. : ) Brandy

Dr. Ivan Edwards October 20, 2025 at 8:25 PM Astounding! This brought me back to my own childhood . . . bare feet at play, rustling leaves, and laughter echoing in the wind. Thank you for capturing that kind of peace. Brandy Nicole October 21, 2025 at 6:38 PM I'm so happy that I could bring you back to those innocent moments of your childhood. Those echos of laughter in the wind are precious, indeed. Thank you, Ivan. Your comment brings a smile. Many wonderful blessings to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Rachel Steinmetz October 18, 2025 at 9:22 PM Oh wow this is written in such a creative format and so beautifully expressed! Well done, Brandy! Brandy Nicole October 19, 2025 at 6:54 PM Dear Rachel, it's so nice to meet you. Thank you for saying this is beautiful and the format is creative. It's my signature style, with the formatting. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Shadow Hamilton October 17, 2025 at 8:46 AM I really like your poem Brandy it does show innocence in the beauty of your write hugs Shadow Brandy Nicole October 17, 2025 at 7:19 PM Thank you, Shadow. It's nice to reflect on simple moments. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Paula Goldsmith October 15, 2025 at 1:01 PM I enjoyed reading your lovely "golden echo" write. Love your picture. I love the autumn time, cool and pretty. Have a wonderful day writing away.................. Brandy Nicole October 17, 2025 at 5:06 PM Dearest Paula, your kindness brings a smile. Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts here with me, about how much you love the picture and Autumn. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May October 15, 2025 at 10:38 AM A season of golden colors, Lovely write Brandy, hugs Brandy Nicole October 17, 2025 at 5:04 PM So kind of you to say, Joseph. Thank you. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Daniel Henry Rodgers October 15, 2025 at 8:08 AM Dearest Brandy, Great to see a poem by you. It was crisp air, tiny feet, and the kind of laughter that lives in the leaves. The smallest moments are loudest when they’re wrapped in love. Such a great poet! Autumn Blessings, Dear Brandy, Daniel Brandy Nicole October 17, 2025 at 5:02 PM Daniel, it's so wonderful seeing your smiling face here on my page. :) And you always leave such kind words. So thoughtful and poetic. This last thought is beautiful and so true. You really should place it in a poem somewhere. :) Thank you for the compliment. I'm just me. Hugs and Autumn blessings to you, my dear sweet friend. :) Brandy

CayCay Godwin October 15, 2025 at 6:04 AM Love the imagery that definitely brings forth feelings. Your words gently sweep through one's lifelong autumn chapters. Brandy Nicole October 17, 2025 at 4:57 PM Thank you so much, CayCay. In simple moments such as these, life is soothing and soft. You and your thoughts are greatly appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Mike Bayles October 14, 2025 at 3:37 PM What strong memories, Brandy. Brandy Nicole October 15, 2025 at 5:35 PM Thank you, Mike. It's good to reflect on simple moments. Many wonderful blessings to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Anne Winter October 13, 2025 at 8:12 PM Dearest Brandy, I love this poem! I love autumn and I love the way you've described this beautiful season! I'm so glad to have read your poem! Sending you love, Anne Brandy Nicole October 15, 2025 at 5:32 PM Dearest Anne, you always know how to lighten my world with your words. So sweet of you to say you love the way I've described this vibrant season. It's a reflection of how I view this time of year. I love Autumn and those festive moments. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, my dear friend. Sending love, hugs and blessings your way. : ) Brandy

Paige Hind October 13, 2025 at 7:42 PM So glad to read you after so long!! This is stunning, and it moves, too. Breathtaking work, work your magic, Brandy !! <3 Paige Hind October 17, 2025 at 2:39 PM It doesn't matter that sometimes it's been long. You write with a rare beauty, ,y friend. Of course, you don't need any magic, but your writing nevertheless is a moving rhythm. Hugs and blessings <3 Brandy Nicole October 15, 2025 at 1:04 PM For me, moments seem to move slow when posting poetry. I know others like yourself say, ' it's been a long time. ' : ) In truth, it has. Your kindness is greatly appreciated. Thank you Paige, for your lovely comment and compliment. I'm not magical. : ) So sweet of you to say. Hugs and blessings your way. : ) Brandy

Arlo Parker October 13, 2025 at 2:05 PM A singular Autumn moment etched in forever. Lovely piece, BL. Too few, too seldom. :o)) Brandy Nicole October 14, 2025 at 4:21 PM So much has changed in our world. It's wonderful to think about tender times, and those moments delicate and true. Thank you, Arlo. I'm enjoying this time of year. Autumn's fragrance is so serene, and I'm still smiling. :)

John Gondolf October 12, 2025 at 2:40 PM Your gentle thoughts take me back to a simpler time. Sometimes we get caught up in the chaos of our lives and don’t take time to reflect on the important things in life. Thank you my dear friend for sharing this beautiful scribble. Hugs, John Brandy Nicole October 12, 2025 at 4:30 PM And that's exactly what I wanted, for you and others that read these words to experience a time of simplicity. You are right, my dear friend, it's good to reflect on the important things in life. I appreciate you and your friendship. Thank you John, for your lovely comment. Hugs, Brandy

Mickey Grubb October 9, 2025 at 3:33 PM Brandy, you offer a quiet reverence for the simplicity of our youth. I love how your spacing slows the reader down, giving us the gentle pace of reflection. The phrase "tiny feet" paired with "simple moments" beautifully describes our childhood and the kind of purity we only recognize in hindsight. I love the piece. Excellent write, my friend. Brandy Nicole October 9, 2025 at 5:14 PM Mickey, my heart wanted to reflect in these delicate moments. I appreciate you embracing them along with me. It's so kind of you to notice the soft phrases within, those expressing youth, along with sweet simplicity. And of course the spacing. It does help create a gentle mood. Thank you, my sweet friend. : ) Hugs, Brandy