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Golden Dreams - Haiku Contest

burnished golden dreams
hide the ravages of time ...
on desires worn path



Penned19/09/2014

sad lovehaiku

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/19/2014 9:25:00 AM

Sorry, one more thing. I looked at the limerick. I still may do something but so far nothing hits me. Thank you so much for your help.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/19/2014 10:38:00 AM

you can do it lol

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/19/2014 9:21:00 AM

It occurs to me that if enough people agree with me and fav this one. We could see an Haiku as poem of the day tommorow.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/19/2014 10:39:00 AM

you wish Maurice, they are not all as generous as you....Seren

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/19/2014 9:19:00 AM

My favorite haiku to date Seren. I am sorry I. I hope you take no offense but I am just going to have to add this to my favs.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/19/2014 10:38:00 AM

thanks Maurice lol no offence taken wow a fav..Lucky me ...Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 9/19/2014 1:57:00 AM

A beautiful haiku Seren I hope it does well for you:-) hugs Jan xxx

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/19/2014 3:27:00 AM

Thanks Jan not happy with title might change. i wrote this in middle of night......Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/19/2014 1:44:00 AM

Creative images, lovely write, good luck, Seren. There's is a typo in the last line

Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 9/20/2014 5:10:00 AM

I think "desires" = desire's

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/19/2014 3:25:00 AM

Ram which word do u think is wrong? if you think its worn, it means tired exhausted. Help cos I cant see it. Seren

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