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Golden Days Take On a Gray Hue

She brushes her long silky tresses, smiling at her beautiful reflection. A closet full of jewels and dresses. Everything about her is perfection. Physical splendor and material wealth fades with age and crumbles in time. Growing old erodes a person's health, a bane once we've past our prime. Spring lasts but a short tender season. We are not renewed like buds or a leaf. Winter encroaches in an act of treason, we're suddenly old, consumed with grief. Tarnished becomes the crown we wore in days of our youth when life was new. But the clock ticks and we cannot ignore our golden days have taken on a gray hue. February 24, 2023 Inspired by Robert Frosts' Nothing Gold Can Stay Contest Sponsored by JCB Brul

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Date: 2/24/2023 5:52:00 PM
Yep, you surely said it well, Lin. A fabulous write, I smile reading it :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/25/2023 5:59:00 AM
Thanks for the comments and your smile, Fin.
Date: 2/24/2023 4:47:00 PM
We are so sure youth lasts forever, until it doesn't, and the years speed up along with the gray, very thought provoking write, best of luck in the contest, Lin
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Date: 2/25/2023 5:59:00 AM
Thank you for such a wonderful review of my poem and your thoughts, Michelle.

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