Golden Daybreak--Haiku

the dance of daybreak. soft, golden, across the stage. sudden rain, now gray. 4/2/2021 ~2~

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/2/2021 8:22:00 AM

Chilly here but blue sky, hope the sun comes out for you. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/2/2021 10:48:00 AM

Hi Tom. LOL..the sun did not go away... I made that up))) The 3rd line of a Haiku has to be different. I find them hard to write. I need to go to HAIKU UNIVERSITY.)?? Happy EASTER to you all. Stay warm. In the 70's here...nice. Pangie xx thanks for commenting...

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/2/2021 7:54:00 AM

You are describing how three or four mornings in New Jersey started this week. This is a good haiku.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/2/2021 10:44:00 AM

Bless you Robert, for saying this is a good Haiku. They look easy but are not easy to write. New Jersey, eh! Wow, we are on opposite ends of the coasts))) go USA. Baseball started. Daughter and grandson going to their first game of the year. Grandson is 14 and pitches at 80 MPH)) Happy Easter, my friend, Pangie xx