Golden

golden crescent moon lone green star in the east.. red horizon breaks

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Michael Dom

Date: 3/29/2014 8:21:00 AM

I like these colours I'm seeing Sara. cheers&thanks

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/28/2014 11:09:00 PM

Yes, the beginning of a spectacular morning here! The moon is my muse so I love any poem that contains the moon within it I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem here this evening! What a superior piece, Great Work!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/28/2014 1:52:00 PM

What a beautiful image of twilight, Sara! Loved every image and every line. Well done, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/28/2014 12:03:00 PM

souper Sara xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/28/2014 10:06:00 AM

lovely colourful haiku. // paul