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This is one of my works from 2019 that was published in a small publication, called Shemom golden ball of light hidden by a rush of fog.... male mockingbirds fight one brief glimpse reveals bare limb fig bush, pear blossoms.... streaked kitchen window weeping willow tree tiny green leaves, thick weeds grow.... a gap in the fence

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/5/2024 8:55:00 AM

Lovely imagery!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2024 2:36:00 PM

Kim, your visit is so delightful. Glad you saw lovely imagery. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/4/2024 12:32:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your lovely write with pretty picture. Have a wonderful day writing away............

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/4/2024 1:23:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. Writing did not happen today. I've been a little off. Your visits are encouraging. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 11/30/2024 1:17:00 AM

Your haikus are mostly centered on the scenes you daily watch from your kitchen or veranda. For the same reason, they are so realistic and beautiful. I always enjoy reading your haikus, dear Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/30/2024 5:54:00 AM

Why, thank you, Valsa. It doesn't take long to see something through the window which gives the muse an idea. Thanks for dropping by. The picture from the internet. Sara K

David Crandall

Date: 11/27/2024 9:39:00 PM

Nice pleasant picture you painted Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/28/2024 1:44:00 AM

Thank you, David. A beautiful day long ago. Yesterday there was a similar rush of fog, but it was a different season of year. Your visit was uplifting. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 11/27/2024 12:29:00 PM

Dear sara i always enjoy reading your haikus, you do them so well! And this is no exception! Such seamless flow of words and beautiful imagery! Hope you are enjoying your day, happy thanksgiving to you and your family. Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/27/2024 2:37:00 PM

Why, thank you, IE. I appreciate your visit and kind review of my work. Sara K

John Read

Date: 11/24/2024 5:30:00 AM

A fine trio of Haikus Sara, fitting the picture perfectly. xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/24/2024 4:17:00 PM

Why, thank you, John. Your encouraging comments are uplifting. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/22/2024 2:46:00 AM

Great haikus. Pleasant imagery right through.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/22/2024 4:48:00 AM

I appreciate the kind review of my work, Victor. Your visits are a delight. Sara K

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/21/2024 10:50:00 PM

Well written haiku Sara, nature at its best. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/22/2024 4:47:00 AM

Thank you, Tom. I appreciate the visit and kind review. Sara K

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/21/2024 8:48:00 PM

I, for one, find 'that gap in the fence,' highbrow humor! Don't know if you intended it that way, Sara, but it reminds me of the '1,000 tiles in the ceiling, and one is missing'-- and that's where the eye lands. Cheers, gw

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/22/2024 4:46:00 AM

Why, thank you, Gershon. Yes, the gap would definitely catch one's attention if it was from being unrepaired place or a deliberate gap that was left open. When I lived on a farm, we would always have places where there were gaps in the fence, but they had a gate that was supposed to be kept closed unless you were moving the farm animals from one pasture to another one. The gap in the fence in this one was a deliberate gap for going in and out but the fencing had a gate. I could see farther out into the area through that gap. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/21/2024 9:52:00 AM

beautifuly written, each element is magical and in place, enjoyed this delicate poem thanks poet sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/21/2024 1:56:00 PM

Your comment is so encouraging. Thank you for the visit and kind words. Sara K