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I combed the mid-day meadows To find your dappled kiss The sweet, delicious, melting mouth And flavors, You, I miss I sought a vow eternal In the Book of Sad Goodbyes But found instead ... A gold star by your name I swam the fathomless abyss That swirls within your eyes To find the wellspring of your soul And thwart its sad demise I sought your truth's exclusion From the Book of Grand Deceit But found instead ... A gold star by your name I searched the August moonlight To find your China skin Your soft and secret places That burn with callow sin I sought to glean your absence From the Book of Treachery But found instead ... A gold star by your name Oh how I longed to stem the tide Of "I promise!" from your lips The drowning flood of tempting tales That like cold poison, dripped I sought our love's omission From the Book of Twisted Truths But found instead ... A gold star by your name ... A star that puts all other stars ... to shame.

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Date: 11/2/2020 2:11:00 AM
Golden verses wrought by a master poet! This to me is as if a master poet of old composed it. Those poets that have so awed hundreds of millions... A fav.. God bless..
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Date: 10/31/2020 4:43:00 AM
Congrats on your sort of romantic winning work. I hope you moved on from that affair. Sara
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Date: 10/30/2020 9:30:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP on this wonderful poem enchanting reader.
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Date: 10/30/2020 9:15:00 PM
The structure of this is enticing, with its repeating patterns: the searching in lines 1-4, the books in 5-6, the refrain in 7-8. The separation from a lover is a powerful force. Another tour de force, Greg, a wll-deserved #1 win ~ John
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Date: 10/25/2020 4:16:00 AM
Such a gift you've given readers with this one, a blessing to savor and enchant. I love it's flavors and hues... it colors the world a azure blue flame with heavy darts that twist and crave to inspire my muse, too. .. God bless you always dear friend
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Date: 10/25/2020 3:01:00 AM
In all of its harrowing pain, a heart continues to love one who is unworthy. Beautifully phrased, Greg. Your book titles are so very appropriate for a disloyal relationship.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/25/2020 4:13:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Jenna - few people stop by to leave comments anymore, and I truly appreciate it! Yes, we love who we love, sometimes against all odds and better senses ... and it doesn't stop at separation. Blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3

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