Gold Nugget

Gold- looks like drops of yellow sunshine,
         that mesmerize the eye.
Gold- sounds like high healed celebrities,
         tinkling down a red carpet.
Gold- smells of money and power,
         mingled with the odor of white diamonds.
Gold- tastes metallic, yet unlike brass,
         doesn’t linger on the tongue.
Gold- feels smooth and cool to the touch,
         not as unyielding as bronze.


A gold nugget looks like a pebble of sunshine,
jacketed in the purest yellow.
And resonates with the accompanying subtle sounds,
of emeralds and blood red rubies.
A symbol of wealth, a gold nugget smells of success,
and is as indulgent as the finest white wine.
Without the tangy taste of brass,
gold feels as tactile as bronze, 
with the added resplendent glitter of gilt.



Written Oct.31, 2015 by Emile for "Color - Poetry Contest".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 6:56 AM
Well done Emle, congrats.
Pinet Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 9:02 AM
Thanks Richard, your support is greatly appreciated. Emile.
Tor Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 9:07 PM
Nice win Emile!!
Pinet Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 9:01 AM
Thanks Michael, your support is greatly appreciated. Emile.
Negron Flores Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:48 PM
Congratulations Emile.
Pinet Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 9:00 AM
Thanks Nayda, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Kendrick Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 2:34 PM
Gold is an outstanding color!!Looks great on the winners' page..Congrats..Sara
Pinet Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 3:09 PM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
A  Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 10:09 AM
Lovely Emile,, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Pinet Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 1:13 PM
Thank you SKAT, for taking the time to support me. Emile.
Sietesantos Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 8:26 AM
Hi Emile, this is an outstanding piece that radiates brightly on the winners' list! It is indeed colored with the poetic brilliance that emanates from your golden pen! Congratulations on your win and of course a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita
Pinet Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 1:12 PM
Thank you Pandita, for taking the time to give me such a encouraging review. Emile.
Reams Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 8:24 AM
Congrats on your win Emile! So many different ways you have described the Golden Nugget. fantastic write. Thank you for entering into my contest that was difficult.
Pinet Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 1:11 PM
Thanks for the win Tammy, it was my pleasure to participate in your contest. Emile.
Hay Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 10:57 AM
Very well done Emile! It was defo a difficult one to do this, but you have it covered, good luck ;)
Hay Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 2:43 PM
A well desereved win for you Emile, congrats!! :) warm regards, Laura.
Pinet Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 11:49 AM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate your support and value your input. Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 6:17 PM
I commend your understanding of this contest Emile. It seems to be just what she is looking for. I am sure this will do well. It is creative and well written. I am not sure if I can write one.
Pinet Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 7:21 AM
Thanks Connie, I wish you luck with yours, this is a brain teaser and a difficult format to follow coherently. Emile.
Leake Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 2:05 PM
Great write Emile, Good luck with this treasure in the contest Best Wishes Kevin
Pinet Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 7:57 AM
Thanks Kevin, your support is greatly appreciated. Emile.
Allison Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 10:50 AM
Oh Emile this is VERY clever - i don't even know how to start mine! Good luck with the contest -I hope you will strike gold with this one:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 12:54 PM
Thank you Jan, I wish you luck with your, this is a difficult format to follow coherently. Emile.
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