Leanne Lovejoy-Burton Poet Free verse

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Gold In Her Pale Blue Sky

"Gold in her Pale Blue Sky"

Matthew 24:30





She speaks to the air 
listen, the wind is beseeching
crying her Home, 
to the Gold in her Pale Blue Sky

She is not the Maestro
listen, the birds are singing
crying her Home,
to the Gold in her Pale Blue Mind

She sings him her Siren Song
listen, he is walking silently on his own
crying his song
crying her Home
to the Blue in her pale fading Gold 

She is not listening to his song
listen, the Son is reaching striking the match
His flame is burning her heart strong
crying her Home
to her beloved blazing Light of Gold

(Lovejoy-Burton/Jan 2018)

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Susan Ashley February 24, 2018 at 8:50 PM Wow! Leanne, how deeply beautiful your poem is with a melancholy tinge from losing your way but uplifting in the promise of spiritual redemption offered from His eternal love.. Your last stanza is gorgeous, especially your last three lines 'His flame is burning her heart strong - crying her Home - to her beloved blazing Light of Gold'.. He feels our pain.. the whole poem is gorgeous though. Your poetry and your whole presentation is artistically and dramatically compelling and beautiful... Love it! Susan Ashley February 25, 2018 at 5:11 PM Agree, belief saturates every fiber of oneself Leanne Lovejoy-Burton February 25, 2018 at 4:18 PM Thanks Susan. Well, we've all lost our way home at some stage. This is not for me, this is for another. But the thought behind it, covers all. Faith is very important. Belief is much stronger. On with the day. x

John Hamilton February 1, 2018 at 8:36 AM Love the lyrical feel to this, as a songwriter I'm always drawn to the melodic feel of words, even if sad, loved it! John Hamilton February 17, 2018 at 9:55 AM Better second time round, pics are interesting, funny how people don't connect God with extra-terrestrial beings, isn't that the essence of the expression? Spirits are what scientists call extra-dimensional beings, they are believers... but just don't know it ...yet! Leanne Lovejoy-Burton February 1, 2018 at 11:18 AM Thank you John.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton January 27, 2018 at 7:35 AM https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RhETTCztp7c

Silent One January 23, 2018 at 7:24 AM A spiritual poem.. Hope you find your way and I hope you find your peace... Leanne Lovejoy-Burton January 23, 2018 at 8:03 AM Thank you for your concern Monsieur SilentO. I am in a very good place. If I wasn't..... I wouldn't be writing. :)