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Going, Going, Gone

I could kill you by overdose
But then you’d become comatose
What’s death without fear?

Better to do it very slow
A little poison in your Coke
Watch you disappear


7/31/11

Received 6th place in "Any Twisted Poem" contest
Received 8th place in "Tail-rhyme" contest

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/28/2011 8:09:00 AM Dear Susan, I'm here to give all my old contest winners a late congratulations. Sorry, I forgot to leave everyone a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read every entry more than 3 times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem.. Honestly I don't like my contest winners with out a quick congrats,.. thank you,..p.d. the late bloomer Login to Reply

Margaret Foster Date: 9/25/2011 10:03:00 PM Doesn't leave a lot to the imagination Susan, the message comes across clearly. She? really means it.....Twisted or what..... congratulations luv Marg Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/24/2011 10:44:00 PM ooooh, I loved this one the first time!! congrats to you. can't wait to see you back here tomorrow. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/24/2011 6:07:00 PM Congrats Susan on another grand win with this dazzling delight of twisted poetry luv.. also..much success with your contest .. enjoy the process and the fun...too... Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/24/2011 5:41:00 PM Congratulations on your win with your twisted poetry Susan. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Bob Quigley Date: 9/24/2011 10:56:00 AM Wow. Short and sweet. Liked this one. Congratulations Susan Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/24/2011 4:34:00 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., Susan Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 9/7/2011 11:21:00 AM Cool, I'll do the same to people I hate the most, but only in my mind, hahaha Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/11/2011 10:47:00 PM I am stopping by this evening to thank you for your kind comments while the soup is up and running. I will never get caught up oh well that's life right? Turn off the tension. Have a wonderful evening Susan. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/8/2011 4:36:00 PM Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail-Rhyme" contest Susan. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 8/7/2011 11:04:00 AM Quick congrats before I get logged out again! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/7/2011 6:47:00 AM amazing concept, susan..a joy to read with matching congrats on your glowing win! :) huggs Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 8/7/2011 5:23:00 AM Dangerously beautiful!!!LOL!Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Jun-Jun Villanueva Date: 8/6/2011 9:45:00 AM CONGRATULATIONS with this fine triumphant placement~~~~~smile~~~~~*-*junjun Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/5/2011 9:17:00 PM This was one of my faves in this contest. Now I can see you are on the list. Congratulations, Susan. Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 8/5/2011 9:07:00 PM I will try to keep on your good side. Great win,Susan. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/5/2011 7:02:00 PM Congrats Susan on your exciting win for this expressive entry ..using new form so well luv.. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/5/2011 5:13:00 PM Congratulations on the win in my contest, Susan Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 8/3/2011 8:33:00 PM You are a lethal little girl! Love the idea, could put it to use. Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 8/3/2011 3:36:00 PM I can feeeeeel your pain. (smile) Very good one here my friend. Good emotion. I'm sure many can relate. I can ;) God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 8/2/2011 7:25:00 PM oh my that sounds close to done.... I see evil peeking out behind your poems...hehe Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 8/2/2011 3:01:00 PM Ouch, I want to be your friend, never your enemy, and if you offer Coke, I will respectly decline , just wonderful Susan, best of luck with this awesome poem and thanks for your comments on my poetry~~ Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/2/2011 1:24:00 PM Anyone close to you or you watching too many Snapped episodes from TV?...Cute..Reads like a winner..Good luck in Dr. Ram's contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I got a chuckle at your comment...Sara Login to Reply

Lisa Cooper Date: 8/2/2011 12:18:00 PM lol great write this reads like a winner to me Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 8/2/2011 9:45:00 AM LOL, thanks for a good chuckle, Susan. This is sure to make Dr Ram laugh Login to Reply

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