Freddie Robinson Jr. Poet Light Verse

Going Bowling

Dude,
I’m going bowling tonight
Got my twinkle toe shoes,
and trusty hammer ball
Dude,
I’m gonna watch the pins all fall
So you can mark it,
Dude
Going bowling tonight,
it’s league tournament time
Get some shiny trophies that’s up for grab
Yeah, Dude ... you can also win some cash
I’m gonna beat that guy
who likes to lick his ball with his tongue
Try not to picture that,
Dude
I’m gonna pound that guy like a drum
So make sure you tell Walter and Donnie
to be on time ... don’t be late
Those shapely pins are gonna be knocked down tonight,
as my perfect score awaits

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Lisa Ricci June 12, 2017 at 11:54 AM Hi Freddie. I think you have been having fun composing poetry that is upbeat and fun. The words and theme define fun and wit. I'm not on a league but I know people who are and who actually take bowling very seriously. I bowl for the fun and not for any perfection or score. But Dude you have the perfect score with leaving your reader feeling happy and well. Nice work Freddie. Enjoy the afternoon. Best of luck when you do bowl.

Kim Rodrigues June 10, 2017 at 8:00 PM Another fun one!

Heidi Sands June 10, 2017 at 1:00 PM The variety of your great writing never ceases to amaze me Freddie. This one made me laugh. Well done :)

Akkina Downing June 10, 2017 at 11:34 AM Good luck, Dude :) this was a fun read, enjoyed it and made me smile, reminding me of how very bad I am at bowling. Lol!