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Going Bowling

Dude, I’m going bowling tonight Got my twinkle toe shoes, and trusty hammer ball Dude, I’m gonna watch the pins all fall So you can mark it, Dude Going bowling tonight, it’s league tournament time Get some shiny trophies that’s up for grab Yeah, Dude ... you can also win some cash I’m gonna beat that guy who likes to lick his ball with his tongue Try not to picture that, Dude I’m gonna pound that guy like a drum So make sure you tell Walter and Donnie to be on time ... don’t be late Those shapely pins are gonna be knocked down tonight, as my perfect score awaits

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Date: 6/12/2017 11:54:00 AM
Hi Freddie. I think you have been having fun composing poetry that is upbeat and fun. The words and theme define fun and wit. I'm not on a league but I know people who are and who actually take bowling very seriously. I bowl for the fun and not for any perfection or score. But Dude you have the perfect score with leaving your reader feeling happy and well. Nice work Freddie. Enjoy the afternoon. Best of luck when you do bowl.
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Date: 6/10/2017 8:00:00 PM
Another fun one!
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Date: 6/10/2017 1:00:00 PM
The variety of your great writing never ceases to amaze me Freddie. This one made me laugh. Well done :)
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Date: 6/10/2017 11:34:00 AM
Good luck, Dude :) this was a fun read, enjoyed it and made me smile, reminding me of how very bad I am at bowling. Lol!
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