Andrew Crisci Poet Tanka

Going Back In Time

One last dream is left...
something I've pursued for long:
to go back in time
and see myself a young man,
to get rid of this madness!
   


Entered in Michael Falotico's contest,
" Tanka Me A Dream "
written by Andrew Crisci

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Debbie Guzzi February 25, 2011 at 1:25 PM I'm probably saner now than I've ever been [sigh] sometimes genetics & circumstance make total sanity only a vague possibility? Perhaps you understand? Light & Love Always

Dr.Ram Mehta February 11, 2011 at 12:45 PM Nice dream you have going back to the young days , good luck in the contest,

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 11, 2011 at 7:16 AM Think we all want to have this dream Andrew my friend.. an excellent entry into the contest ..and good luck with this reminiscent piece luv..

Andrea Dietrich February 10, 2011 at 11:28 PM I love this Andrew,It's one of MY dreams too!!!

Robert Pettit February 10, 2011 at 11:10 PM Nice write, but there's one too many syllables in the second line. Convert "I have" to "I've", and you make it under the wire.