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Godzilla

There once was a woman named Camilla, She wanted a castle but not a villa, So she got a prince, But he started to wince, When she started to look more like Godzilla. Poetry contest: monsters and Marvels Date: 10.08.14 Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/30/2014 12:31:00 AM

WOW WOW ...... Godzilla, find her spawns love .....rajat

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/15/2014 2:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your HM Dorian. Cute poems.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/15/2014 12:40:00 AM

Nicely composed Limerick, Dorian, congrats on the win

Jan Allison

Date: 10/14/2014 12:26:00 PM

Oh I do love your limericks Dorian many congrats on your Honourable mention Hugs Jan xxx

J. R. Corbin

Date: 10/9/2014 11:30:00 AM

LOL...I think I know her. Thanks for the smile, Dorian. Best of luck with the contest. Jim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/9/2014 11:56:00 AM

You do JR?? Enquirer mind wants to know. Lol....haaahahaha ...are yo sure of that? I don't think you have the faintest idea where my idea for this one came from and who inspired me in a sort of negative way for it. But I am glad that this woman did and my brain came up with very witty and funny limerick that I penned here. Do you still think you know her this Camilla woman my friend? Eh it might be that after all there are two of them walking this globe that look like Godzilla, and that's a very scary thought you just planted in my head. Maybe yours is unknown and not make the tabloids hopefully....lol ;) thank you for your visit J.R.and for your kind comments. Glad to know I made you smile, then it achieved my goal. ;) lol. I much appreciate you in all. Hugs! Love, peace and light! xxxx D.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/8/2014 3:11:00 PM

Yikes, I'd be wincing too if a mate started to look like Godzilla! Lots of great humor in this write for Deb's contest. Sending winning wishes your way, dear. Love, Carolyn

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/9/2014 12:58:00 PM

Hi Carol my sweet friend! Me too. I am just so glad I wasn't the one who married her. Can you imagine that... Well anyway I am a very straight gal (as a ruler and not bent like a C neither) and she wasn't my type at all let me tell you that right here. ;) hahaha...thank you for dropping by and your kind comments, dear. Hugs! Best wishes to you too. Love peace and light! xxxx D.

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/8/2014 1:22:00 PM

Dorian, Thanks for this Limerick here. Quite crafty on your part to introduce the creature Godzilla this way. At first, I thought is was going to be like other Godzilla writes, but it wasn't. Sounds like the Prince here was unlucky with his mate. I liked your write here very, very much. And it's a "Big 7" from me. Check out my poems. I have some new writes posted. Best Wishes!! Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/9/2014 12:52:00 PM

Eh Gary I already did check your new posts and commented. Have a safe lovely day my friend.;) xxx D

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/9/2014 12:49:00 PM

I don't know about the unlucky part you wonder Gary, but to me she still looks more like a Godzilla than a pretty lady. Lol ;) well glad you read my kind of Godzilla and spared your life after, my friend. Thes monsters are well known to be very destructive and mean...vicious ugly things that can kill all in their path...thank you for the wonderful comments, you made my day a lot brighter and appreciate very much you 7. You're so sweet Gary! Hugs! Love peace and light! xxx D.

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/8/2014 1:12:00 PM

Calmness is not good always. Lovely done, my lovely friend. Lol! Cheer up. Loved always,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/9/2014 1:06:00 PM

Thank you My friend BL! You're very sweet! have a lovely day! ;) Love peace and light! xxx D.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/8/2014 7:45:00 AM

Good job! These are harder than they look and I like yours. BG

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/9/2014 1:08:00 PM

Thank you Barb my friend! Yes the can be very tricky and hard to compose and comply at times. ;) have a great day! Love and hugs! xxx D.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/8/2014 3:59:00 AM

Haha...wonderful Dorian.... Cheers Tim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/9/2014 1:03:00 PM

That's not a woman Tim, she's a beast. Lol... Hahaha...;) hugs! Love peace and light! xxx D.

Sebastian Aaron Baez

Date: 10/8/2014 12:43:00 AM

LOL! awesome poem and that is one harsh looking woman.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/9/2014 1:01:00 PM

Lol...she sure is my friend...lol...;)thank you for your visit and kind comments Sebastian. Love peace and light! Xxx D.